i want it!

something i wanted...and now i got it....so im happy much more than usual....

its too shine,
and yess i want it!
take my breaths,
take my soul,
yess i want it!
i want it whole,
give it to me now,
i dont care,
i want it here,
if i never have it,
than call someone to save it,
yeah
sure
i will break it,
so you cant use it,
its all on you,
if you wanna save it,
than you should give it,
and you know,
if i want it,
i get it...
.....

a glitch that can stop you

Author's Note

i want a review NOW!

hope you enjoyed my madness..^^
show me some criticism...
thanks for give a review...yeah ...i know you will...

Reviews

[Great Aunt Astri]

The girl in the poem was determined to get it and she did! I had a slight problem reading the written poem, but when I read it aloud it sounded much better and had quite a beat!

[Laminators Dubai]

yup!.
i checked you profile....you were a teacher!!!!!!! awesome.....
thanks for the comment!!!!!!!!! ^^

[Great Aunt Astri]

I was a teacher but I am still a learner!

[Laminators Dubai]

soo cool and sweet and thoughtful....^^

[Great Aunt Astri]

Keep reading and writing, Glitch!

[Great Aunt Astri]

Thanks, Glitch. Keep reading and writing!

[Great Aunt Astri]

Thanks Glitch for your kind comments. Keep reading and writing!

[Izabe143]

I love this this is me to the boys I hang out with at school there like my brothers

[Laminators Dubai]

ha ha ha....
thanks for coming! ^^

[Izabe143]

Welcome. It like when they grabs food at lunch and leave it unattended its a mistake it almost all goes missing cause I'll eat it. I eat a lot for a tiny 8th grader. But if the boys steal my food the faces get slapped

[Laminators Dubai]

ha ha ha...cool....

[Eddie Phillips]

A poem of pure obsession. Hey we get what we ask for. We have not because we ask not! Get yours before someone else gets theirs! Thanks for this poem

[Laminators Dubai]

well i got what i wanted...im feeling better than great!

thanks eddie...for commenting.....^^