wow!

so sassy....

seeking for knowledge,
i found you,
peeking for meaning,
i saw you,
looking for me,
i got you,
hopping for fun,
i win you,
dont ever dare to leave me,
or i will kill you...

Author's Note

just a play...with rhymes...hope you have enjoyed...

Reviews

[Rahul]

HAHAHAH, you're really damn funny.. lol it's a funniest write i've ever read :) but it's a true write also, which conveys some deep meanings :) great job.

[Laminators Dubai]

glad that i made you laugh..^^
thanks for reading and laughing....^^

[Rahul]

Thank you for making me laugh and writing the funniest piece :)
your welcome :)

[Divya Punjabi]

cute poem i say... wearing innocence :)

[Laminators Dubai]

im fairly a innocent girl...
thanks for reading...^^
my grandni live in ajmer...just so you know...

[Divya Punjabi]

hmm good to know :)

[MikeV]

I love this! The ending put a smile on my face
Keep it up :)

[Izabe143]

This is strongly written I love it

[Gurdeep...The Lost]

This is 'vow' as the name of the poem :-). Its like each action has a reasoned result, thats wat I get.
Nice write)

[Laminators Dubai]

thanks deep!
im glad you like it...

[Inda]

Oooh, crazy meets passion lol. Another charming write.

[Laminators Dubai]

he he he 6_9
thanks!

[Sami Khalil]

I love your serious poems along with the funny ones. They put a big smile on the face...Splendid...:)

[Laminators Dubai]

thats what i wanna do sir....
thanks for passing by!
enjoy!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Eddie Phillips]

I laughed at this. The end was cryptically funny! There is a thin line between love and possession. Great job on this short poem.

[Laminators Dubai]

yeah!
you got me just right...
im going crazy about someone...and im not in love!
read moreyeah!
you got me just right...
im going crazy about someone...and im not in love!

even i dont know what to do or feel...

[Frieda P]

Ha, I'm not messing with you glitch! Very sassy indeed, full of moxy!

[Laminators Dubai]

i know mam..
your a fun person...
thanks!

[Frieda P]

Coming from a crazy person, I'm not sure that's good lol ;-)

[Laminators Dubai]

ok
its just fine...enjoy your life...keep smiling...

[Frieda P]

You too sweetie... :-)

[Laminators Dubai]

ay ay captain!