wow!

so sassy....

seeking for knowledge,
i found you,
peeking for meaning,
i saw you,
looking for me,
i got you,
hopping for fun,
i win you,
dont ever dare to leave me,
or i will kill you...

© 2013 Laminators Dubai

Author's Note

just a play...with rhymes...hope you have enjoyed...

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Rahul

HAHAHAH, you're really damn funny.. lol it's a funniest write i've ever read :) but it's a true write also, which conveys some deep meanings :) great job.

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11 Years Ago

glad that i made you laugh..^^
thanks for reading and laughing....^^

11 Years Ago

Thank you for making me laugh and writing the funniest piece :)
your welcome :)

Divya Punjabi

cute poem i say... wearing innocence :)

Posted 11 Years Ago

11 Years Ago

im fairly a innocent girl...
thanks for reading...^^
my grandni live in ajmer...just s.. read more

11 Years Ago

hmm good to know :)

MikeV

I love this! The ending put a smile on my face
Keep it up :)

Posted 11 Years Ago

Izabe143

This is strongly written I love it

Posted 11 Years Ago

Gurdeep...The Lost

This is 'vow' as the name of the poem :-). Its like each action has a reasoned result, thats wat I get.
Nice write)

Posted 11 Years Ago

11 Years Ago

thanks deep!
im glad you like it...

Inda

Oooh, crazy meets passion lol. Another charming write.

Posted 11 Years Ago

11 Years Ago

he he he 6_9
thanks!

Sami Khalil

I love your serious poems along with the funny ones. They put a big smile on the face...Splendid...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago

11 Years Ago

thats what i wanna do sir....
thanks for passing by!
enjoy!

11 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)

Eddie Phillips

I laughed at this. The end was cryptically funny! There is a thin line between love and possession. Great job on this short poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago

11 Years Ago

yeah!
you got me just right...
im going crazy about someone...and im not in love!
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Frieda P

Ha, I'm not messing with you glitch! Very sassy indeed, full of moxy!

Posted 11 Years Ago

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11 Years Ago

ok
its just fine...enjoy your life...keep smiling...

11 Years Ago

You too sweetie... :-)

11 Years Ago

ay ay captain!

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Added on September 4, 2013
Last Updated on September 4, 2013
Tags: wow, sweet, sassy

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Laminators Dubai

United Arab Emirates

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