talk to me...

what do you hear...when you dont hear a thing?...do you believe what those voices says?...

it’s been a long time, 
time I listen just them, 
time I get what I want, 
only one thing is left creep, 
they still want to hear them, 
still they want me to scream, 
want me to crawl again... 
so I listen music, 
so I’m being pathetic. 
So I just be bad, 
so I can make them out of my head... 

a life full for glitch

Reviews

[Laminators Dubai]

I don't Want to turn back time....it hurt my head.
Those sounds coming back to me. Im freaking again.
13/12/13

[Rahul]

Great write, but in this line where you've written.. you listen music.. you can write it in a proper way like this "YOU LISTEN TO MUSIC"' :) Overall is great, i loved everything your theme, your words and concept as well as the title too :)

[Pankaj Lohia]

well written glitch... its kinda sad the way you end it saying a life full of glitch..

[Laminators Dubai]

its kinda sad i admit...thanks...keep reviewing..lol
^^

[koty bell]

Do u hear voices in ur head cause i do there yelling brilliant... Great work lol:)

[Laminators Dubai]

yeah...
back in 2010... i hear voices...but now im fine...
thanks for this review....*_*

[koty bell]

Im so sorry i did nt know i thought the voices thing was a joke i was just playing along im so sorry if i offended... So so sorry

[Laminators Dubai]

its fine pal!
its nothing but a joke for me too...
^_^

[koty bell]

No that sort of things not funny im sorry and i feel like an a*****e:(

[Laminators Dubai]

i know you are feeling bad but just dont use that kind of words
its getting lame....
hope you get what im saying....

[koty bell]

Ya i do just feel..........crummy:(

[Laminators Dubai]

okey......
^_^

[koty bell]

Forgive me?:(

[Laminators Dubai]

that was a lol...
never mind....
have fun!
love world....

[koty bell]

Okie dokie:)

[♪Barklight♪]

Pretty awesome ^^
A really interesting concept, and the ideas are put together well. Agreed ^^

[Laminators Dubai]

thanks
but i guess sad is not my style
happy poems are really easy to write....
you think i should do sad ones too?

[♪Barklight♪]

I think you should write whatever you want to ^^ If you like writing happy poems, you can write happy poems. If you want to try writing a few sad ones too then you can go ahead ^^

[Laminators Dubai]

come on...
i really really need help...

[♪Barklight♪]

You can always write both I guess, you're sure good at both and its always good to add a little variety into things

[Laminators Dubai]

thanks
i guess i can hear your voice........
god bless you...

[♪Barklight♪]

thanks, no problem

[Laminators Dubai]

i just want say that...
being bad...for being good...is good...

what you think?