more of me...

we want to so much more... but we cant... im saying so bcoz....i was like always kinda sick.... so feel so dumb and lame...

every night i sleep saying,
what a moron me,
baby you could do more,

everyday i wakeup saying,
im gonna find more of me,
today i will do more.

Author's Note

if you are thinking its short and lame....
maybe you right...

Reviews

[Rahul]

Its so powerful write... you made. It's really a motivational write to keep onself motivated every time :) Nice flow of ink :)

[Lydia Shutter]

You need a self esteem booster shot! :) Your poetry shows you have talent...you are surely not a moron and the fact you are exploring poetry shows you ARE finding more of you. Keep up the good work. Lydi*

[Laminators Dubai]

thanks!
i use monor for make it more sassy...

[Creepy Swine Guy]

Yes ... to criticize your brevity might be easy ... but to this thing that you propose ... would be remarkable.

[Laminators Dubai]

i dont get it?

[Creepy Swine Guy]

It's easy for someone to say that your poem is short and lame ... but to do what your poem suggests would be a wonderful thing, indeed.

[Laminators Dubai]

ooooooooooooooooh,
thanks!
love world!

[William J. Marsh]

Short is often sweet! This was short and sweet.

[Laminators Dubai]

thanks!
^_^ n_n

[smilempsn]

well thatz indeed short.. but not lame at all..
We all do that some or other time..

Sometimes its good to feel that way, as it sometimes give us new directions... :)
Hope you come out of that mind of state soon in some positive manner...

[Distantview123]

A poem is as long or as short as in needs to be. Some of mine are quite short too. I think this poem says all it needs to, and most people will be able to identify with it, I would think.

[Henrique J. Hackenhaar]

That's a nice Poem, Sometimes I find myself saying something, and later, not doing it :

[Laminators Dubai]

yeah...
thats a one happeing time...

[Sami Khalil]

Good attitude , relevant concepts...Splendid...:)

[Prritiy]

good introspection and nice resolution

best wishes