so i still use ink pens

ink pens inspire me...

everyone say, old is gold.
but I feel, old is bold.

old is brave,
old has its own beauty,
old has played its duty.

old will never die,
old cant even lie.

old inspres me to try,
so i still use ink pens,
It keeps my writing fly...

Author's Note

its for you coyote....hope you like...
readers please comment if you think im on a right path....

Reviews

[Kwiksie Ifediora]

this is really lovely. it's great when you can read a million meanings into a few simple lines.
well done dear. :)

[Laminators Dubai]

thank you!
^^

[Harsh]

short and sweet.....very well penned poem........
keep it up

[Laminators Dubai]

thanks pal.....

[William J. Marsh]

After all the years of writing and publishing, despite of technology, I still carry a pen and paper everywhere I go. When all of the old things have gone away, for the world it will not be a pleasant day. Well put Glitch!

[Laminators Dubai]

i cant live without my brushes and pens!
and one another thing, old people are a really good and cool to be friend.....
thanks for reading.^_^

[Derek M.]

My favorite part is "old will never die, old cant even lie"
This can be taken many way and not even just about ink pens.
It could mean that a family member passed of old age, but they will never be dead because they will always remain in everyone's memory.
Very well done :) Keep up the good work.

[Laminators Dubai]

im gonna be 18, but by brain im very childish(most of people hate it).....i always kinda sick so expeirence is none about life...but using ink pens is like having that complete feeling....like old things trying to say...good...

[William J. Marsh]

The Christian Bible says that approaching life with child like faith is a blessed thing. Being childish at your age is a sign of innocence and purity. Don't let that slip away.

[Laminators Dubai]

thanks! I'm on it...
god is with me...
well people say that for me...
and its my vow, i'm never growing up!

[Laminators Dubai]

read my baby brain........
your gonna love it!

[Laminators Dubai]

baby brain is my another writing...

[Ally Monique]

I love this! It's short but powerful :)
I personally enjoy old things too, and I've always preferred using ink pens to write!
I especially like the two lines:
"Old is brave,
old has its own beauty"

Thank you for sharing!

[Henrique J. Hackenhaar]

Heey! pretty nice! I really enjoyed!

[♪Barklight♪]

yay for old things! ^^
Nice write, and its good to write in pen. All the crossing out and side notes... when your done the result is so authentic! ^^

[captain]

A very wise piece. Thank you for sharing such kind and wise words.

[Distantview123]

I too still use ink pens (well, biro pens). I keep them in a jar, by my computer! This is a fun write, but one with a good message too. The old ways are sometimes the best, and "progress" is often a double-edged-sword, so to speak. An enjoyable read! ~ Robert.

[Laminators Dubai]

makkhan kisi aur ko lgao...see i can do this hindi too!

thanks rajiv ......
da................ha ha ha

[Rajiv Anand]

Yeah you can speak hindi, now I can believe that you can! yw..

[Laminators Dubai]

sorry robert this comment is not for you....uts for rajiv...
thank you so much .... you get just as i thought....