I'm a common writer, just as you (actually I'm not even a writer).I ask too much questions(your gonna hate me). as b'coz i think too much most of my thoughts just passes by me, sometime it feels like thoughts are using my brain more than me. usually people don't ignore me, they just listen peacefully (i just don't know why). I notice thing that other don't see, i don't judge, i just highlight them. I'm using "Highlighter ink" as my soul, my view, the way i see things...
again Its my soul that make my words, feelings and view, my soul is effecting my words and made them glowing. I just don't know where do thoughts come from? that makes me desperate...
i have to protect my soul, from the viral thoughts...
but the inner me is just too curious, didn't care about harm and get burns...
b'coz its made of the highlighter ink...
thanks for reading,
if anything annoying you just let me know...
(i just don't question, i answer them too)
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Hi. To be truthful, I never did develop any interest in poetry. I am not qualified to critique poetry. Often, I don't even understand what a poet is trying to say. So, asking me to critique poetry is like asking an elephant what it is like to fly a plane. LOLOL!
I'm sure someone who is a poet is much better qualified to review your poetry. Thank you for asking me to review your poems, though.
Thomas C
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
i can see you gone turbo...
you read it enjoyed it
thats enough for me...
It works well. The presentation was perfect. I like the subject and the feeling of the poem. It never brings you down and you walk away from it feeling upbeat and inspired. Great job.
I liked your presentation style of your poem. I thought it's asymmetric style interesting and "boppy". What I liked better though, was your author's note. Seems like it was an extension of the poem above. The author's note was all personality, it seems like you are digging deeper for an expression started or inspired by your own poem. That's a good way to get more out of your writing. Between the two pieces, I lean toward the note.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
thank you sir!
glad you know how ro read a poem. thats why we love known poets...
You can never, ever question too much. It's the curiosity that makes us who we are.
I loved this poem, I think it's beautiful. If you write what you think and what you wonder, than you can b a writer if that's what you chose.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
I know that, B'coz I already know much that makes me more curious than ever,
thanks for like.. read moreI know that, B'coz I already know much that makes me more curious than ever,
thanks for like it,
glad you enjoy,
Hummmmm, no.
i dont want to be a writer, but what i want to do, writing is the only way...
love world
I loved it, and that's new for me because I'm not that big on poetry. Unless you count mangas as poetry, I not that good on reveiwing things. I still think it's awesome.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
well if your heart think its right, than it is right.
its for think
for enjoy
f.. read morewell if your heart think its right, than it is right.
its for think
for enjoy
for me review is not captains a-hoy!
thanks!
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