heaven

if try we can do it if you give a hand

if you sing it,

will be a song for me,

if its you,

then waiting seconds,

will be long for me.....

i don't want to say,

and if its you,

i don't need to say,

i love you!

(i write i love you so the readers know that)

Reviews

[Kwiksie Ifediora]

this was nice. very simple and sincere emotions expressed in a sweet rhyme scheme.
i like. :)

[Laminators Dubai]

thanks! i dont write poems. its my fav rhyming that i best,
but im still in the nest.

[The dark story]

i like the elegance of this poem and the rhythmic style adorns it.
"i don't want to say,
and if its you,
i don't need to say,
i love you!"....
loved those lines. thanks for sharing. nice work.