PINS AND NEEDLES

Something has changed!

Stick me with blunted knife!

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He's got me on pins and needles!

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Something just ain't right!

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He's my prey this time!

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I smell his scent!

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But even though I'm the killer,

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He has me in his sights!

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the words "Pins and needles." For a long time. Hard sometime to know. Who is the prey? Who is the predator? Nice dance of thoughts. Who became the prey? Thank you Glenda for the entertaining and fun poetry to read.
Coyote

[GlendaK]

I think it's a never ending game. Don't you? God instilled this "hunt" instinct in us. Since we don't go after animals to kill and eat anymore, we go after each other.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are right dear Glenda. New world. Not a better one.

[GlendaK]

Coyote, I've never heard it put better!