Verse 2: Bipolar

Bipolar

 

Believe madness is retribution to mental stability.

Understanding my disorder is a two-edged sword.

Replaced by is an axis of complete unknowns.

Reviews

[Tai Ryens]

You've expressed the caprice of unknowable emotions quite well, and very simply.
I particularly like how you express that bpd is a double-edged sword, capable of hurting both yourself and others, even if it wasn't intentional. Well done, softly spoken, and simply portrayed.

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Thanks for your time and review...and your interpretation of this verse...

[AYVID N]

You are most welcome. I always admire your impressive collection of work and hope to keep reading more.

[Faceless Poet]

I am mad as the monster may - be
dual face, nameless, restless might - be
madness is normal in our penned-up world
In my creation, I am the master or their lord
creator of words.

Bipolar is a Circular matter
Like a double-edge behind the mirror
The mind is in chaotic interior.

- faceless being

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Faceless Being - I like your lines up top...I believe we all have a bit of bipolar in all of us...I'm 13 different characters in my novel...got to have something wrong with me...thanks for your time and review...

[Faceless Poet]

ahh, I know right, just like my outside is up-tight
yet my mind is really all out, out-right.

you are very much welcome

[Trevor Barnett]

A creative and beautiful way to portray bipolar disorder. Thoroughly enjoyed!

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Your time and review is noted...thanks for reading...this one...I wrote this for my older sister...