Verse 2: Bipolar

Bipolar

 

Believe madness is retribution to mental stability.

Understanding my disorder is a two-edged sword.

Replaced by is an axis of complete unknowns.

Reviews

[Tai Ryens]

You've expressed the caprice of unknowable emotions quite well, and very simply.
I particularly like how you express that bpd is a double-edged sword, capable of hurting both yourself and others, even if it wasn't intentional. Well done, softly spoken, and simply portrayed.

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Thanks for your time and review...and your interpretation of this verse...

[AYVID N]

You are most welcome. I always admire your impressive collection of work and hope to keep reading more.

[Paul Hunter]

that first line is amazing. that's exactly what it's like.

[AYVID N]

Awesome. This disorder spans two universes the variables of which are totally unknown but sometimes prone to great genius and creativity... Very Interesting.

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Trice...thanks for the time and comment...

[Glen Yumang Manese]

You've written this disorder greatly out, with all it's duality.

-Elisa

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Just for my older sister...a few writings are done for her...especially --- the E-magazine --- BananaWriters.org --- which is named ironically --- "Sister"...but I think you may have read that one already...not sure...thanks for the visit...EL...

You are welcome Glen, always, I will ponder my thoughts within time over all of your work, :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I like description in the chapter. I like how you defined the mental stability. You said a lot using so few words.
Coyote

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Coyote --- thx for the review and your time...

[Frieda P]

Perfectly descriptive passage into those unknown emotions.

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Making your rounds...thx for the feedback...

[Frieda P]

I'll be back....about that font. ;)

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Don't threaten me...cyborg...I knew you' weren't human...secret is out now...hehehe...

[Frieda P]

Big mouth....

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Catch you in the morning...late here and time for some R&R...later...

[Deuces]

Balance needs imbalance in an imperfect world. Everything is unknown in the end. Enjoyed this.

[Glen Yumang Manese]

G Von Ché --- again thanks for your time and reply to my work...there cannot be one without the other...

[VelvetRosetta]

Unknowns, indeed. And very much so a two edged sword. Heartfelt look into a deep dark reality.

[Glen Yumang Manese]

I'm happy to see this get reviews...in part for my sister and in turn for my work...thanks...

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Again another deep setting here, I love the 2 edge sword effect:))))))))))))))))))))

[Glen Yumang Manese]

I did this verse for my older sister...thanks for your review and time...

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I know a lot suffer with it and wow its pretty bad but newer meds have came out to really treat it. My pleasure:)

[Glen Yumang Manese]

I believe they are over medicated myself...but having seen my sister with the problem since --- as far as I can remember...she was a genius...the all out straight A+ student and an artist...they say there is a thin line from Genius to Madness --- once you cross --- there's no really turning back...you must live with it...an Air Force Academy prospect and bipolar got her...only if I could of seen that become true...a beautiful mind --- she was given...

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wow sad but true!