Please note, you do not have to leave a comment, but are welcome to do so if you wish. Just editing through my work here. This will be my next book. I will post only 40 verses.
I am in search for the Cover of the Book. I hope to get underway with this one in 2016.
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Excerpts from my comments on reviews from fellow writes here at Writers Cafe:
Celestial is just on this planet Earth. If I find her is in the outer realm. I might not live to enjoy her presence. I have been married and now remarried for 2 years. "Luna & the Ra" is about a muse. Look carefully into my writings here and some in "The Onyx - Vena Amoris". The verses are not just to enlighten the mind, but give even more within the verse a cryptic message. The "Muse" is in the verse. I do not use the words "it" / "itself" in any of my writings. Including my novel, makes me challenge my mind and pour out from within. This has developed me to change and form like a phoenix.
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I started your collection of poetry and have enjoyed it, will continue to read over time.
I find it to be very inspirational and thought provoking, will definitely buy your book when it's released.
Your author's note speaks volumes about you as an artist, and I love the reference to the phoenix.
Well done my friend, i'm looking forward to reading much more.
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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Traci - thanks for your time and review...this is the continuation...after the book: The Onyx - Vena.. read moreTraci - thanks for your time and review...this is the continuation...after the book: The Onyx - Vena Amoris...I wanted to follow the structure of the previous writes...but yet give a different theme with the overall transformation with this series of this collection: Luna & the Ra...I have to edit that excerpt in my Author's note...I wrote that as is...here in a comment...please take your time...I put out 40 verses...and do not want to overwhelm the reader...I just find editing them easier this way...in collective group...they were presented individually back in the day...and I will do so with my new materials...
I started your collection of poetry and have enjoyed it, will continue to read over time.
I find it to be very inspirational and thought provoking, will definitely buy your book when it's released.
Your author's note speaks volumes about you as an artist, and I love the reference to the phoenix.
Well done my friend, i'm looking forward to reading much more.
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Traci - thanks for your time and review...this is the continuation...after the book: The Onyx - Vena.. read moreTraci - thanks for your time and review...this is the continuation...after the book: The Onyx - Vena Amoris...I wanted to follow the structure of the previous writes...but yet give a different theme with the overall transformation with this series of this collection: Luna & the Ra...I have to edit that excerpt in my Author's note...I wrote that as is...here in a comment...please take your time...I put out 40 verses...and do not want to overwhelm the reader...I just find editing them easier this way...in collective group...they were presented individually back in the day...and I will do so with my new materials...
I like "Achilles Heel" to me you seem to be explaining the deeper magic of human life including the rise and downfalls. Just a thought. Quick question is Achilles a mythical god?
Half mortal - half god...you did watch the movie Troy...correct...
11 Years Ago
Yes but its been a while ~
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One of my favorite characters...among the mortal deities...only way to kill him is the Achilles Heel.. read moreOne of my favorite characters...among the mortal deities...only way to kill him is the Achilles Heel...
Hello Glen, I am just starting to read through your work. It is very interesting and I will be taking the time, gradually, to read it properly. What I have read so far is fascinating and certainly gets one thinking.
Margaret
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11 Years Ago
MAGS - THANKS FOR YOUR TIME...AND DO TAKE YOUR TIME...I DO NOT WANT YOU TO READ THEM IN ONE SESSION... read moreMAGS - THANKS FOR YOUR TIME...AND DO TAKE YOUR TIME...I DO NOT WANT YOU TO READ THEM IN ONE SESSION...I PUT THEM TOGETHER...A VARIETY PACK TO GET A SNEAK PEEK AT WHAT THE BOOK HAS TO OFFER...A COUPLE MORE MONTHS AND THE JOURNEY IS COMPLETED...WITH THIS BOOK: THE ONYX VENA AMORIS...GOOD TO SEE YOU HERE...
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OOPS!!! THIS IS THE OTHER BOOK IN THE MAKING: LUNA & THE RA...SORRY I WAS QUOTING MY FIRST BOOK...
Your muse hums a melodic tune, Glen! I enjoyed the journey on your train of thought. Your collections are consistently enjoyable to read. Lydi**
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I hope so...I'm writing a new one...off limits at the moment...but I believe like any artwork...the .. read moreI hope so...I'm writing a new one...off limits at the moment...but I believe like any artwork...the artist must be satisfied before presentation...or those that do see the work before hand are cursed...always been a omen with art..those that seek beyond...gain knowledge...but in the end like the Pyramids of Giza the haunt flows in them to damn nation...
Goodness...thanks for your input and time...Anomaly is intended to be a song...and the rest I've got.. read moreGoodness...thanks for your input and time...Anomaly is intended to be a song...and the rest I've got a feel for them...I liked the play with words with Anomaly...give a perspective of using the chess board as a love story...
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Goodness...thanks for your input and time...Anomaly is intended to be a song...and the rest I've got.. read moreGoodness...thanks for your input and time...Anomaly is intended to be a song...and the rest I've got a feel for them...I liked the play with words with Anomaly...give a perspective of using the chess board as a love story...
I've read Achilles Heel and will continue to read the rest overtime.
I've got to tell you that I loved that first poem, I am totally going to buy this book when it come s out.
The imagery, what it discusses, the truth in it. Only time will tell if I decide Achilles Heel is my favorite.
I have a feeling the others are just as good.
Well done! :3
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11 Years Ago
Bluefire- in life...if I have inspired another person...besides myself with these writings...then I .. read moreBluefire- in life...if I have inspired another person...besides myself with these writings...then I had done my purpose...and keeps me driven to do what I enjoy in life...the written word...thanks for your time to read...and your thoughts to these collection...My first book: The Onyx Vena - Amoris will be available very soon...and this will proceed after...
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No problem. I am very intrigued by your first book and am probably going to read that as well. I'm r.. read moreNo problem. I am very intrigued by your first book and am probably going to read that as well. I'm real curious to what it's about.
Your writing and inspirations are phenomenal... I appreciate you sharing them with us here... your muse has sung such a brilliance through your voice and so many distinctive topics. This was an amazing journey of thought.
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Craig - thanks for you time to come here and read my work...If I was to show you the first drafts..... read moreCraig - thanks for you time to come here and read my work...If I was to show you the first drafts...you would think it was a different writer... well may be... to some extent...In this second rendition of a collection...I can see me mature more...not saying: The Onyx Vena Amoris lacks maturity...but I can see where I crossed over... the great Divide in my writings...and looking forward to more writings...I do not want to surrender...and there's no room for retreat...
I am impressed with this entire collection, especially the Letter to the President.
t seems especially timely right now in America.
"Vision of our eagle is open to the determination."
Plus many many more golden nuggets of truth.
Great job my friend!
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I have mix feeling with our current President...by no means am I saying he's not a worthy President... read moreI have mix feeling with our current President...by no means am I saying he's not a worthy President...or we would not of elected him...of course...I'm a Republican...his path is a revolution...and with a revolutionary theory...as with change...there is a period of anarchy...civil unrest...I support the fact he's President...but I'm a Republican...so I have many questions...and yet many have been unanswered...to a better way for America...
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I am currently, done with my first book of verses: The Onyx - Vena Amoris. Friesen Press finished in December and is out for release before the holidays at the end of the year 20.. more..