A. k. a. F. A. D. Series III: Shogun
A Book by Glen Yumang Manese
© 2021 Glen Yumang Manese
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some writings i feel that i shouldn't comment on. not because they aren't amazing, but because i know with absolute certainty that i will make myself sound idiot trying to sum up what i found amazing in such a small amount of space. this was one of those writings.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Pawprints - thanks for you time to read my work...this was a journey of a write...I had to really ta.. read morePawprints - thanks for you time to read my work...this was a journey of a write...I had to really take everything in...since my alter ego AKA FAD was not my normal style...from what I am comfortable in writing...but I'm enjoying this now...and making a continuation with this Series...
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I felt an operatic theme to this. Not in just the words, but how the event lead from one to tother. It reminded me of http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jeV2tMQHzBk
Impressive and speculated.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
MM - THANKS FOR YOU TIME AND REVIEW OF MY WORK...
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Glen,
Absolutely amazing! I like how you bring in elements of a scholar's life. I also like the references to Einstein and Aristotle. Makes one think.
--Brooks
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11 Years Ago
Brooks - thanks for your time and review...this is actually the 3rd Series of the AKA Filipino Ameri.. read moreBrooks - thanks for your time and review...this is actually the 3rd Series of the AKA Filipino American Dream Series...you started from the back...but quite alright...they are all set in different themes...
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Wow Glen... you have quite the talent. I love how your writings just draw the reader in. Once I started reading it was like a rap and I couldn't stop. The use of the lines repeating is fantastic and really adds a beat. Satisfaction has reached the boiling point.
"Anoint me the wrong way.
Pay the Price is Right now.
Foul play knows how to counteract.
Facts are no longer Pulp Fiction.
Diction is elementary, my dear Watson.
Thomas Edison is ready for mass communication.
Destination goes where no man has gone before.
Soar like Captain Kirk on Star Trek.
Let me introduce you to Generation X.
Complex is the times now.
How far can I go with this?
Dismiss, sky is the limit.
Exit a door only to open another.
Weather was a climatic transformation.
Alteration to status quo is present.
Your play on words and connections are amazing, the above is just one of many verses I enjoyed.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Dye - thanks for your time and review...If I would show your the transformation of this one...from t.. read moreDye - thanks for your time and review...If I would show your the transformation of this one...from the beginning...would look less effective...but I have found a medium now with the comfort zone of writing AKA FAD...also known as Glen Yumang Manese...I want that effect with the reader to give them a reason to keep reading and enjoy what I have to say...in turn we both grow together...and learn a new experience...
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some writings i feel that i shouldn't comment on. not because they aren't amazing, but because i know with absolute certainty that i will make myself sound idiot trying to sum up what i found amazing in such a small amount of space. this was one of those writings.
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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11 Years Ago
Pawprints - thanks for you time to read my work...this was a journey of a write...I had to really ta.. read morePawprints - thanks for you time to read my work...this was a journey of a write...I had to really take everything in...since my alter ego AKA FAD was not my normal style...from what I am comfortable in writing...but I'm enjoying this now...and making a continuation with this Series...
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Wow, I need time to sit down in an arm chair to read this. Where can I get a written copy?
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
This is it for now...thanks for you time to check my work...I will have my first book out in a coupl.. read moreThis is it for now...thanks for you time to check my work...I will have my first book out in a couple months: The Onyx- Vena Amoris...but a bit different read then Filipino American Dream Series...but I will keep this in mind...working on Series IV...now...
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11 Years Ago
and the best of British luck with it. I take it,that it will be available in England?
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11 Years Ago
Yes... England is on the list...most parts of Europe will have access to the book also...and availab.. read moreYes... England is on the list...most parts of Europe will have access to the book also...and available in E-Book...just a click and a download away...
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Epic. The rhyme scheme and rhythm is just in fire, Glen. Truly thrills from Manila lol. The Blarney Stone must kiss you for the gift of gab. :)
~Ev
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Welcome back... Busy with my book, The Onyx ~ Vena Amoris... collection of verses... sent to publish.. read moreWelcome back... Busy with my book, The Onyx ~ Vena Amoris... collection of verses... sent to publisher and will go ahead with print... Just promoting for the release... I wanted to create each AKA FAD in a different scheme... this one I like a lot, the word play came easier after the other 2 writes... As for the Blarney Stone... I have to visit there sometime... in person and engage in the event... Thanks again...
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11 Years Ago
You're welcome, Glen...I had to read it a couple of times before I left a comment. I believe everyon.. read moreYou're welcome, Glen...I had to read it a couple of times before I left a comment. I believe everyone has their own unique voice that every individual can harness. You have set the bar for Pinoys, to write their heart out and speak about their experience as Filipinos in America. I hope one day it can transcend from being Filipino Americans to just Americans...where we cross out any racial boundaries. It's ideals I strive to make a reality, at times. I wish you much success on your literary endeavors.
~Ev
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whew! this is full of wisdom and aphorisms. it's its own language that could flow in no other way. at times cryptic but makes up for in rhythm and rhyme. brings to mind a spoken word piece and perhaps can be taken as a manifest of humankind. i like your penchant for words and letters and be able to create a poem just on those. i also find it to be apocalyptic in content and prose. this is an excellent collection of art. ang galing!
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thank you! Glad to see your view point of my work. Filipino American Dream Series has been a work in.. read moreThank you! Glad to see your view point of my work. Filipino American Dream Series has been a work in progress over the years. They seem to get easier to create. Now I have a better grasp of the technique of the over-all concept with word play. Do my best to write them down. Until, I can find a person to take my vision to the next level. Again, good to see someone give me a word of encouragement. Salamat Po!
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11 Years Ago
Walang anuman. :)
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Glen Yumang ManeseFollow me at Twitter tag: @GlenManese, St. Petersburg/Pittsburgh/Makati, Philippines
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I am currently, done with my first book of verses: The Onyx - Vena Amoris. Friesen Press finished in December and is out for release before the holidays at the end of the year 20.. more..
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