5 senses

5 senses

A Poem by Austinthepoet2000
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Nothing special, just a late night free-write

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Sight
It brings us beauty
through smiling faces
and sunsets with loved ones

Sound 
It brings us joy
from the sound of children laughing
to the gentle "i love you" floating from her lips

Taste
it brings us together
from grandma's secret cheesecake
to the cherry flavored lipstick of your soulmate

touch 
it brings us compassion
from holding your first-born in your arms in the hospital
to the trail of affection trailing from her fingertips as she drags them across your cheek

Smell
it brings us nostalgia
from the smell of your childhood home
to his aroma filling your nose as you put on his jacket

© 2018 Austinthepoet2000


Author's Note

Austinthepoet2000
Cheesy, yes, and altered a bit to include everyone to the best of my ability.

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and all these senses and what they invite?
it is what molds us into what we become as adults---
and we need to appreciate that we have them...
nicely expressed

j.

Posted 6 Years Ago


this is good writing simple and cute but very nicely written too

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on July 30, 2018
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Tags: Cute, Light

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Austinthepoet2000
Austinthepoet2000

Paw Paw, MI



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