Exhausted

She is not weak she has just tried to remain strong for far too long.
She just needs someone to be able to be stronger so that she is allowed to be weak and rest in safety .

Reviews

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Great interpretation of the word ‘Exhausted’! If I could make a suggestion; to strengthen the imagery and message penned – perhaps consider your wonderful write in the following format! Bless … :-)

She is not weak
She has just tried
To remain strong
For far too long

She just needs someone
To be able to be stronger
So that she is allowed
To be weak and rest in safety

[Suhd]

It's all about having someone who loves and cares about us I agree with this. It's a good one.

[Cookee korczynski]

this hits very close to home.

[Karmee]

yes, so very true, all of us can only be strong for so long before we break down.

[Hannah]

True. No matter how strong we are, there are times when we need someone to be there for us. It's a tough world, and it gets to even the best of us.

[Rye]

short and to the point love it....

[Yari Garcia]

*Nods* I love how succinct this is, yet with a really good message.

Nobody can be strong 100% of the time~ it IS exhausting. And also, there is nothing wrong with letting someone else be strong for you, if only for a little while.

Great job! I'm really enjoying that your writing always has a message, yet it's not preachy.

Yari

[lightsong]

Hi my friend :)

Someone who believes in her, that's all what she wants, someone who believes in her, the same as she believes in her own self, and though she doesn't know, but there are many ones out there, who love and care about her, she just... didn't met them yet, but she is not weak, and she will meet them, soon!

[poetgurl]

I know this feeling really well. great write

[Warrior]

Thank you and it's nice knowing we're not alone.

[Gee]

This was my mum. Raised 7 of us on her own, worked to the point where we would be fostered to give her chance to recover as she would be totally knackered.