Love Rehab

Yet another, old poem of mine (:

24 days, 13 hours, 7 minutes, and 3 seconds
since i last spoke to you
the pain is extreme
the voices in my head are screaming
my body is freezing
and breaking out in sweat
minute after minute it gets worse
i drop to my knees
tears start to fall
my addiction to you 
is so hard to drop
i must stick through
to get over you
because loving you is like a drug
it is poisioning me
after i can finally face you
i will never take your love again

 

Reviews

[Addie]

Very intense and emotional. It's kind of like the lyrics to a song which is very creative. I like it =)

[P.S I Love You]

cool writing! it's really emotional i can easily see that! i'm guessing she's obsessed with someone?? well if she's not she's obviously getting over him/her. well yeah Good Writing.. =)
-Eleven

[qaralynn]

great write..i really like it
good job

[A.M. Everlasting]

I really like how you portray love as an addiction :) It gives you a very intense vibe from the poem, and altogether makes it very intriguing. The name, also, is really good. :) WOO!

[Dillon Cotter]

very relatable, love can be addictive if you are in love with someone. verl meaningful and powerful emotions!

-Will

[Dylan I. Cree]

Tis better to love and lost and all that bs. this was good. Love is like a drug that no one can get completely off of we only move on to something that's hopefully better.

[Geminair]

i can relate to this too love can indeed be a drug and the widthdrawl symptoms just as bad,but at least in times like that writing can be a distraction even if just for a little while........

[Naomi Montana Walsh]

Truly , told love is a drug and you capture the pain of detox..in this poem .there is a movie called Eturnal sunshine of the spotless mind..about this doctor that actually can erase the memory of a love lost.. it is really an intresting thought..

[TheActOfRandomness(:]

I reallly liked it!
And I can totally relate! :D
Good Job!

[Sharkapillar]

I can relate to this so well
Great write