Wow amazing. Just recently, I came across Knock by Frederick Brown. He begins his short story by describing the shortest story that exists (two lines long, as written below).
"The last man on earth sat alone in a room. There was a knock on the door..."
Your piece reminds me of these two lines. So cleverly concise, Love it!
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you...it was for a challenge. I'm not really good at this sort of thing, I usually need A LOT.. read moreThank you...it was for a challenge. I'm not really good at this sort of thing, I usually need A LOT more words. I'm glad you liked it, though! *humbled*
I just came from Jacob's page and read one from him like this kind of thing : Six Word Short Story. Now, I understand.
Metaphors, Oh how I love metaphors. Such beauty to let the poet weaves words so creatively, such challenge for the readers to think outside the box.
I liked the story --very much, Sarah.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Aaww...it was just a goof. Not really my "style", I write poetry, and usually it's long winded. Th.. read moreAaww...it was just a goof. Not really my "style", I write poetry, and usually it's long winded. Thank you, though. If you like metaphors, be careful you might get lost on my page because I have been accused of over using them... :)
11 Years Ago
No worry about the metaphors, I myself is guilty of exploiting the beauty of the term.
.. read moreNo worry about the metaphors, I myself is guilty of exploiting the beauty of the term.
Lol... Poets love metaphors, sometimes too much, but there's always room for more irony, or maybe it's just me that can't get enough... Very fun Sarah:)
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Yeah, I'm a lover of the metaphor, I'll admitt it freely... :)
Your metaphors are untouchable, for they are into the next level (DOT).
Sorry love, couldn't resist... fantastic ;-) and you know why!
- Elisa
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
haha...thank you, Elisa!
11 Years Ago
LOL, if I would take part of the contest, my line would be: " I hate six words contests" but that's.. read moreLOL, if I would take part of the contest, my line would be: " I hate six words contests" but that's me... urgh, I suck. :)
That is the way we are, love.... we suck and we are ironic, and sarcastic LOL hahahaha *winkies from.. read moreThat is the way we are, love.... we suck and we are ironic, and sarcastic LOL hahahaha *winkies from over seas* x
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