We Don't Have To Replace

This is a song i wrote to a girl i really loved so much at the verge of us breaking up...too bad things really never worked..anyway cheers...its a rock song

Do you still remember the day we fell in love?

Do you still remember me taking you to school?

Tossing coin betting on when to have our first kiss

Does the spell of love I cast on you still exist?

Do you still remember us singing to our favorite song?

Do you still miss the days I would force you,

Force you just to take your pictures

 

[BRIDGE]

     To me it is just like yesterday

     When we fell in love with each other

     Though you insisted you are not the kind of girl for me

     At last you said you love me and want me

     Want me with you forever

[CHORUS]

                We don’t have to replace laughter with tears

                We don’t have to replace hopes with fears

                We don’t have to replace our stories with arguments

                We don’t have to replace love with something else

                We don’t have to replace us with strangers

 

Do you still want us to spend 100 years together?

Do you still have the pride to say no to another guy?

To say no, no matter how far I am from you

Do you still miss me when you are far from me?

Do you still want me to call your phone?

To call just to say “I love you and I miss you.”

Do you still find me handsome?

Or is the dynamic life making me another portrait?

 

[BRIDGE]

 

[CHORUS]

 

It’s been time since I saw your pretty face

And the loneliness tonight is tearing me to pieces

Sweet dreams have become my nightmares

I miss when we used to think alike

I miss crying to the world to leave you alone

I miss dr. dernelle and jasmine

I don’t want this distance to increase

 

[CHORUS]

 

Everything around me it’s just like yesterday

Though it’s been months since us became

Never forget, never leave and never forsake your love for me

Is still my code forever

 

Remember when I used to say I was afraid?

I was afraid of this time

I hope this won’t be a novel with no happy ending

I hope I won’t be another article in your library

I hope you'll be the girl I spend with my 100 years

Reviews

[champslik]

not tha bad

There is someone I would like to ask these questions too.. although I am not sure that I would want to spend my forever with them... But back to the review, I think that this is really interesting and well written. I can definitely see it as a song! Thank you for sharing :)

[GunMetal]

Even though it is lyrics, it should still be categorized as a "poem" not a "story".
I think "you" should be "you'll" in the last line.

This was cool. It had good rhythm and I could picture it clearly as a song.

[G!o]

Thanks...I'm sure going to rectify it

[Leslie Philibert]

I really like this... I wan´t to work out the chords !

[G!o]

It's okay do your thing. Update me how it goes though. Thanks...

[MOON]

Lovely write , chorus good.

[RaspberryBullets]

Aw. Fair to say you had my heart melting, be my boyfriend? haha. Seriously though, awesome work! xox

[G!o]

Lol too bad the addressee never got the chance of hear me sing it to her and I'm glad it did melt your heart. Well i am a sucker for girls who can pen their thoughts to stories...w!nk w!nk. Thanks.

[Gurdeep...The Lost]

How lucky wud be the person for who has been reffered to in this beautiful work.....realy nice and worth-appreciating..)