Don't Go

I'm here,
Forevermore.

Don't go away,
Don't close that door.

Don't sit here and say those words,
The words I want to hear.

Just listen to me,
And let me be near.

You're right, I could just go on,
Leave you and have fun.

Would I? Could I?
Until the beginning of the sun?

No.
I wouldn't dare.

So stop.
You're making me pull out my hair!

Just don't go.

Reviews

[Edward Lancheister]

loyalty and love. i like the lines

Don't sit here and say those words,
The words I want to hear.

Just listen to me,
And let me be near.

the lines of need to be listen not just be heard

[A. Amos]

Deep and beautiful expressions involve in your amazing poetry...great job my friend

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

Awe this sounds bittersweet, It is hard to let people go and sometimes we would like them to stay forever. I like this, it is short and sweet and to the point.

Good Job