Unable to Tell

Why can't I just tell you how I feel?

This just ain't right,

The pain you put me through.

But yet I still love you, 

I've given you my all.

All my love, 

All my heart,

All of me...

But it still don't seem like enough.

I've tried my hardest to make you happy.

But still lost you in the end.

Bow my hearts a shattered mess.

Laying on the ground.

I refuse to clean it up.

Because once I fix it,

You'll just break it again.

What's the point? 

To living?

To loving?

To everything?

I don't see a point without you.

But yet I still put my trust in you.

Because I can't let of of what I've held so close.

Because you're special.

And I love you.

Reviews

[N!LoC]

ohhhhhh wowee... this sort of poem is sooo right up my alley! i can relate to it naturally

[Distantview123]

A poem full of honest emotions. Expressive, with some good imagery. ~ Robert.

[Sami Khalil]

"I don't see a point without you.

But yet I still put my trust in you.

Because I can't let of of what I've held so close.

Because you're special.

And I love you."
A nice poem...Thank you for sharing...:)

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

this is sweet D: sad that the other person doesn't seem to love back but perhaps in time who knows. It would be hard to love someone and know that they didn't feel the same.

Good Job