False Hope

My heart breaks
Knowing deep inside
I have fallen
Once again for him
But with my whole heart
Do I love another
Who has stolen my love
But the pain
Is still great
As I hear your tale
Knowing I shouldn't
Have believed
Those words
He spoke.
So here I stand
Tears falling
From my eyes
Feeling the pain
Deep inside.

Reviews

[scripted]

this piece has a nice flow to it... i like your way of expressing yourself, i can read your feeling in this piece... nice write! yours truely Danielle (scripted)

[Kenzi Griffin]

Thanks you(: