I Miss

I miss seeing you,

I miss to talk with you,

I miss to laugh with you,

I miss to dance with you,

I miss kissing you,

I miss hugging you,

I miss us,

I miss you.

Author's Note

Please be honest, I really want to know what do you think :)

Reviews

[dementedreality]

I miss[ ]talk[ing] with you,

I miss[ ]laugh[ing] with you,
I miss[ ]danc[ing] with you,

This could be a style choice, but it feels like you want to carry the present tense throughout the piece to give out the feeling best.

This does a good job of expressing longing and loss. Of expressing remembrance with bittersweet memories. Of love lost to time.

[G.A. Wonders]

Thanks! I appreciate your opinion!