Just Do It!

JUST DO IT!

When your heart says "No"
But your mind shouts "Go!"
What should you do
Follow your emo
Or give way to your ego

When you know it's dry
There's no more tears to cry
And you don't like to try
All you want is to fly
Oh, the echoing, "Why!"

"Why am I here?"
"Why are you there!"
"Why should I care?"
"Why did you dare!"

Dared to catch me
No matter how I flee
Like an annoying bee
Did you not see
Please set me free!

For if you don't
I also won't
If you don't want
I also can't
It's confusing, right!

Just do it!
Please stop it!
Stop checking me out
It's time to forget
Did you not get it

Yes, it's annoying
Yes, I'm not enjoying
So please stop following
Please stop checking
Please just stop fighting

Reviews

[Just Kim]

Wow! Brilliant piece here, This is amazing, I echo the word "Ouch"
This is so good though.

[Oydrin]

I have a word for this poem: OUCH. Anyway, nicely done. I got hooked from the beginning. I only find it sad that the persona wants his/her object of affection to stop fighting for him/her. That's a tragedy when there's still so much love inside... But is this the other side of an unrequited love? Because that's how I see it.

Anyway, your packaging is a triumph! Sending you love from the Philippines.
God bless!

[Himaya Ka]

Wow, nice insight!😀 " But is this the other side of an unrequited love? Because that's how I see it." Ahmm... maybe... Anyway, thank you for reviewing, kabayan!🙂