Te Amo

Me encanta el mundo.
I'm delighted by the world.
Every beautiful human,
Every bright little creature.
Nothing escapes me.
The magnificence of mother nature,
And all her children,
Surpasses all expectations.

Homing in on all that is splendid,
Your attractiveness
Can not be denied.
Not merely your looks,
But the person deep down.
True beauty has a generous soul,
That sees past the corruption,
And focuses on warmth.

For you to see the real me,
Shows just how special you are.
To see all my imperfections,
And to compare them to a world so
Flawless.
It makes me vulnerable,
But around you I don't mind.
It only show that I love you,
It just shows
Te amo.

Reviews

[Cdnsurfer]

"Te amo"? must translate as "Tu amour" or "Your love". Ok, so I don't know Spanish. ;-) This is a beautiful ode to your wonder and love for life, the world and your friends. Yes, it is indeed a wonderous and beautiful world, and don't ever lose that view of the world. Don't let cynical and pendantic people sway you from the path. You are Earth, as the Earth is you. Cheers! Rob

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Beautiful and loving..

For you to see the real me,
Shows just how special you are.
To see all my imperfections,
And to compare them to a world so
Flawless.
It makes me vulnerable,
But around you I don't mind.
It only show that I love you,
It just shows

When we feel comefortable enough to show our flaws and imperfections.. to me that is love..

Beautiful..

Chloe
xoxo

[Gary H]

Love the idea of revealing yourself to your true friends to show them your love.
Sad reflection on the world that not everyone has the gift of being able to show their love and those that do often become disenchanted when it's not returned. Yes, we're only safe with those we know well enough and your poem reflects this. Thanks.

[Kara Emily Krantz]

"It makes me vulnerable,
But around you I don't mind.
It only show that I love you,
It just shows
Te amo."

yay yay yay! one of your best, darling. :) what a beautiful tribute to friendship... god, friends are so priceless. you really say this so well

hugs

[Lady Muck]

awh darling *hugs* you always say you're vulnerable, I wish you didn't feel that way. Be big and strong, a fortress, or a hardboiled shell. 5 minutes at least.
love you