It's Fine!

        Dedication, Motivation, Application.
You have to stick to it.
Keep going.
No matter
What.

Nothing is ever too hard,
No problem too big.
If you just put
In the effort-
You''ll make
It.

Everyone will support you.
It'll all be okay.
If you want
Help, just
Ask.

If only life were that easy.

Reviews

[Peter Truth]

I really like this piece, it's starts out really inspirational yet ends in the sardonic way I love so much.

[Cdnsurfer]

What I really like about this piece, Gillzy, is the simplicity of your words and the format, which stands in contrast to the last line. It makes the impact of the punchline that much stronger. the opening "Dedication, Motivation, Situation" sounds like a motto of some sort. Is it? It gives it a strong opener. I'm not certain about "Situation" though. If it's a motto, fine, but if not, perhaps something more on the lines of "Dedication, Motivation, Application." Or play with those words. It could be "Dedication, Application, Motivation! Now!" DAMN! Then you can end on a DAMN!

I liked the message you sent and it's uncluttered approach. This is pretty good, Gillzy.