I Wish For Him

More cheesy love.

I had a wish
That one day
I'd find him.
I had a wish
I'd find the person
I could confide in.

I wished he'd care
And that he'd love.
I wished he'd listen
And never shove.

I had a wish
I'd find the person
I could be myself with.
I had a wish
That one day
He'd find me.

Wishes are used
When times are tough
To help
You
Through.
What do you wish for…
- What do you dream? -
When all your wishes
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Reviews

[Hope]

Beautiful piece! Thank you for being vulnerable and sharing your innermost conversations. I loved how you break up the lines to help the reader know how you speak. Maybe a few questions to explore for this piece would be 'What would you confide in that person?' 'Who is the you you want to be around them?' The further we dive into these seeking questions the more we discover about ourselves.

[Barry Simiana]

only bad writing is contrived, and you do not write badly. what do you wish, what do you dream, when all your wishes come true? simple, the same for everyone you care about.

is it okay, yes, very much so.

[Crazy Cat Man]

nice piece....at the end we all wish for a companion that will be our support and love us through the thick and thin... great piece

[Helen Woodward]

All writing is contrived Gillian, where yours differs is that it's not obscure and I love that about it. You say it straight out, no guessing games...love it! You have expressed your feelings very well in this nicely set out piece of poetry. Don't put yourself down from the get-go (smack your backside) Do some more!
Love
Helen...

[Cdnsurfer]

Ha ha! Gillzy! Cheesy yes, delightful yes! Happy for you. Now, you start building a future together. That's what you do now. Thanks for the smile. Hope the sun never sets on you and yours! Rob