You'll Stick Like That

You'll Stick Like That

A Poem by Gillzy
"

When someone close to me is upset, it tends to upset me just as much. I empathise too much.

"

Fast
     Heart
Worried
     Eyes
Creased
     Brow

Mummsy warned,
"Don't care
Too much!"

Daddy advised,
"Don't get
Involved!"

If the wind changes…
          I'll be worried
          Forever.

Not everyone is
Happy.
I can't
Make them.

Learn not to care.
Learn
To
Let
Go.

© 2008 Gillzy


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Those worry lines and the wind changing!
If you care too much it just shows what a gentle soul you are......
you can't make happiness although you can contribute.Happiness must come from within
and be content in ones self.
But its impossible to learn not to care.........you are too creative!

Posted 17 Years Ago


10 of 10 people found this review constructive.




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To not care is tough, but to care too much and have to let go, thats even tougher. Beautifully written.

Posted 17 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.

i liked this. it was...light hearted carefree and whimsical. at least those were the feelings conjured up.
there was something underneath it all, too, though...a certain seriousness.

Posted 17 Years Ago


5 of 5 people found this review constructive.

ahh this reminds me of how i once thought.. thx for taking be back in time

Posted 17 Years Ago


5 of 5 people found this review constructive.

the last line cements this poem, sympathy in my eyes the eyes of the desencitized

great poem btw

Posted 17 Years Ago


5 of 5 people found this review constructive.

Yes, I remember being told the very same things. After a while as life passes there are some things you can't avoid and, however hard you try, worry will always grab hold of you - usually when you least expect!
And I think caring is an essential part of keeping each other alive as well. Trouble is, it's caring for the right people.....

Like the style and layout.

Posted 17 Years Ago


5 of 5 people found this review constructive.

hmmmmmmm interesting. The danger of not caring is that we can become bitter and cold. So we must learn to still love so we wont become so hardened. We could miss an opportunity for gaining new love.

Posted 17 Years Ago


6 of 6 people found this review constructive.

It is the hardest thing ever to let go and i know. Well Done :)

Posted 17 Years Ago


6 of 6 people found this review constructive.

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i feel like i'm on the same wavelength as you, sometimes i care too much and it's extremely hard to just not care.
really good job!

Posted 17 Years Ago


6 of 6 people found this review constructive.

Love never hurts. It is misplaced trust, faith, and expectation that cause pain. We expect too much, we hope too hard or we believe in something just wishing it could be. Caring and loving are good and wonderful things, no matter what and I pray you NEVER lose that ability. Blessings of Peace and Love dear. I enjoyed the read.

Posted 17 Years Ago


6 of 6 people found this review constructive.

oooh...as if this one is in a different time period. I love the poem because it seems no one talks like that anymore.

Posted 17 Years Ago


6 of 6 people found this review constructive.


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Gillzy
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