the thing

the thing

A Poem by David McNeeley

i  want to get it rigth
I watn to know what will happen when
I am fille d
i...

I wish the world would stop here
I wish I could un..
I like difference, individualtiy
I chnage

My heart is so full it 's over flowing
my brain is shutting ti down
and my midn is trying to reason
But i'll be just fine

There are somanychoices
Possibilities This line seems imnmportant to me not oto edit
not to change to be
feelings confusin mind and body one mind is free and floating away
but body stays

idf only time would sit still and my head wouldn't fade aways
i know this has been full f arreors and it could confound dumbfound
but your opinion isn't the thing the at draive s me and pshes me harder
her heart will meakeme see it's importants and you will know what I measn

© 2014 David McNeeley


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David McNeeley
David McNeeley

Tucson, AZ



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