is me

is me

A Poem by David McNeeley

I feel empty inside
I feel weak
I feel like the whole world is
And i am not

i wish I saw something exciting
I wsh I knew what to say
i wish could feel the way
but my heart is tired and given to sway

My love you carry with you my heart
you know my feelings
you know my heart
Iwant you to see
and i wnat you to know
that with you forever I would go

Maybe it's my desire to commit
My need for independence
From the daily grind
From the things make us same

I don't want what was
And I'll wish for hope to see
what ever will be
if  it mattered the future to be

I know my ways are strange

i wnat everyone to see

Who I truly am
 is me

© 2014 David McNeeley


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David McNeeley
David McNeeley

Tucson, AZ



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