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Windless

Windless

A Poem by Gillian

Enthusiasm dwindles

Like a kite in still air,

Tumbling down with swoops of stealth

And effortless soars of ease,

Diving through a surreptitious brevity

To fall flat at a charmless end.

© 2009 Gillian


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Captivating, and though enthusiasm's end might not be, rather charming. Easy and beautiful to read, with a sad, lackluster truth about it. Much loved. 100%

Posted 15 Years Ago
Very nice, I liked it before and more so now." To fall flat to a charmless end" great line, Thank you for sharing. God Bless

Posted 15 Years Ago
Are you saying that some guy took the wind
out of your sails ?
Sorry about that.

You have an exceptional command of the language.
The arrangement of your poem shows talent and
imagination.

Thank you for this nice creation.

------ Eagle Cruagh

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is amazing. What a beautiful and brillant piece. Very creative, original, and well done!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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 Added on February 17, 2009

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Gillian
Gillian

Waterford/Dundalk, Ireland



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