Admired from afar

Admired from afar

A Poem by Gianna Y

As I play over

the images in my mind,

I hear you laugh,

I see your perfect smile..

The whole time I've known you,

it's always been like this,

admiring you from afar,

just wanting another glimpse.

Sometimes I wonder

if you might care about me,

but I'm just a child to you

because of my immaturity.

Who do you hold dear?

It's anyone but me..

I apologize for being blunt,

but I thought you kept better company...

Sorry.

© 2014 Gianna Y


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I think that you composed this poem in a very sensible way. Poems and songs about admiring someone from afar are not new. One of the best know songs would be that old classic "Ballerina" where a secret lover in the second row admires the girl who the Art of the Dance has taken from him. "Dance ballerina dance ... loves gone ballerina gone..." and so forth. What is getting in the way of this relationship? How powerful is this distraction? It's a tug-o-war!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aethereal

10 Years Ago

Necessity is the mother of invention! Here the necessity is to achieve the Classical style. Remember.. read more
Gianna Y

10 Years Ago

Indeed, thank you for all of your very helpful pointers! I will try to get ahold of the Classical st.. read more
Aethereal

10 Years Ago

The more you use it the easier it get to use. Also get yourself a good rhyming dictionary from Amazo.. read more



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I think that you composed this poem in a very sensible way. Poems and songs about admiring someone from afar are not new. One of the best know songs would be that old classic "Ballerina" where a secret lover in the second row admires the girl who the Art of the Dance has taken from him. "Dance ballerina dance ... loves gone ballerina gone..." and so forth. What is getting in the way of this relationship? How powerful is this distraction? It's a tug-o-war!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aethereal

10 Years Ago

Necessity is the mother of invention! Here the necessity is to achieve the Classical style. Remember.. read more
Gianna Y

10 Years Ago

Indeed, thank you for all of your very helpful pointers! I will try to get ahold of the Classical st.. read more
Aethereal

10 Years Ago

The more you use it the easier it get to use. Also get yourself a good rhyming dictionary from Amazo.. read more
A heartfelt splendid work.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

10 Years Ago

I am very glad that you expressed your feelings so eloquently.
Gianna Y

10 Years Ago

I'm just glad I got it out of my system! Haha
zainul

10 Years Ago

Thats a great breakthrough indeed.

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Gianna Y
Gianna Y

Fresno, CA



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