Heartbreak

I'll get over it... I think.

My heart cries out for help like a wounded animal.

It has been placed on a stovetop to warm,

Then left to burn with rejection.

No one truly knows how this feels until they experience it  

For

Themselves..

It has been scratched

With the claws of regret

Then shot

With a bullet of hate,

But somehow,

My heart has allowed itself

To be pierced by Cupid's arrow.

Let's hope that this time,

What I feel will stitch up the wounds

On my broken, scarred heart,

And leave only happiness

In the wounded places.

Author's Note

Tell me if this is good plz!!

Reviews

[Wolfwind]

Honestly... I think it could be tweeked to help the flow a bit better... But I think the meaning comes through pretty clear... To me it tells of the pain of a bad break up and then the faith needed to let cupids arrow strike again and offer the chance at a new round of heart with someone else.

Keep writing! =)
Aaron - Wolfwind

[Gianna Y]

Thank you, I will get right on that.

[Chloe]

It's sad, but beautiful I love it :)

[Sahara M.]

If I could rate this 1000 out of 100 I would. You are amazing. I love you :)

[Empty Spaces]

it twas mazing! take it from a sad poet xD