Bleeding love note

Just letting out the pain.

Bleeding love note.

Whispered love note
plays upon my heart,

But yet the
beating stops.

Maybe the pain
Will be no more when
my beating
heart stops.

Love note of
my beating heart.

© Benita-Staebell-McCartney

Written May 10, 2015

Author's Note

Letting out the pain.


Written May 10, 2015

Reviews

[Alfred Kukitz]

Benita,

I told your pain, now that it's out, to dissolve into infinity.

Regards,
Al

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Thank you for your kind review and
comments they're appreciated I wish it
was that simple sometimes I'm feeling someone
else's pain or tears I'm very Sensitive and Empathic and the person that's connected to me feels it too having the same feelings like we miss each other this is what this was.
God bless. Benita

[Jamestown]

Well written and expressed!
Really sad emotions here and I will pray for your heart,
Sometimes we experience things that hurt and I'm sorry
It's your turn:( Thanks for sharing and I hope writing it
out helped, b-blessed!

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Thank you I have do it more then
once depending on how I feel. But I'm very Sensitive Empathic so at times it's normal for me to feel this way but most times it's others emotions I think it's both.
Thank you for your kind review and comments they're appreciated. GOD bless. Benita