Be my love poem my literature.

Inspired by the picture not about anyone I love.

Be my love poem my literature.

 

Gaze of a tender kiss,

 

Shakespeare's novels of
  serenade romance.

 

Spoken words of
dead poets never die.

 

Times of art where
it was food to their souls.

 

Literature upon your
breath romantic caress
of poetic lyrics.

 

May your tears be
the story in my heart.

 

Be my love poem
and a tender gaze
of kissed words.

© 2014 Benita Staebell-McCartney

 

Author's Note

written March 21, 2015
Saturday 12:56am

Inspired by the picture
not about anyone I love.

Reviews

[Confuser]

Benita: I love it....I sighed, oh my girl....you took my breath away...reading it I found it to be so romantic! Everything you wrote would be exactly what I would wish to hear.
Times of art where
it was food to their souls.
Literature upon your
breath romantic caress
of poetic lyrics.
Love it: You are a great writer! Bravo...

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

I am in love with love it feeds my inspiration and I breathe it always writing about it makes me smile and I simply love Literature :) and we all need a little romance in our lives pure of heart like that I am glad you enjoyed reading it. Your review comments are appreciated. God bless. Benita

[Confuser]

I do too!!! You gave me an idea for my birthday in May...I'll have my son pick from poems, and have my husband read it to me! Yay! TY

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

good idea :) happy early birthday.

[613]

This is so beautiful. This strongly resonates with me.

- Brittney

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Thank you I prefer poetry over novels
or stories ive done short stories but
not too long as
I get overwhelmed and board from reading
anything that's too long I like mine not
to be too long but I love literature. Thank you for your kind words and review and comments they're appreciated. God bless. Benita

[613]

You're welcome.

[Alfred Kukitz]

Wow! Some of the lines are wonderous. Their is a soft gentle beauty in this poem Benita akin to your soul.

Regards,
Al

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

How sweet of you to say thank you for your
kind review and comments they're appreciated.God bless.Benita

[Einstein Noodle]

lovers of the mind and heart ... can happen and never see face to face .. never hear each others voice .. poets and romantics ... you tell a lovely story Benita .. its heady .. and intelligent .. very nice!
E.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Thank you E my friend for your kind review and
comments they're appreciated. God bless. Benita

[anonymous]

fantastic! great job with this. it made me feel something.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Thank you for your kind review and
comments they're appreciated.
Well I am glad I usually use lots of emotions in my pieces. God bless. Benita

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. I have been reading the ancient writer. Donne is the erotic poet and Ben Jonson, Dryden tell us what love can be. I enjoyed the complete poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Ah ok I don't usually read or write anything Erotic or lustful
I stay in the lines of love thankfully. your reviews and comments are appreciated. I am in love with love it feeds my inspiration and I breathe it always writing about it makes me smile and I simply love Literature :) and we all need a little romance in our lives pure of heart like that I am glad you enjoyed reading it. god bless. Benita