Mon Amour my summers breeze

Inspired by the beautiful picture of the lady. written Jan. 30,2015 2:10am

Mon Amour my summers breeze

Soft strawberry yellow
honey locks of hair.

Milky white
silky skin to the touch.

She smells like a
summers breeze in
a sweet field of tiger lilies.

Deep blue eyes
as deep as the ocean waves.

She is his pink rose
gentle as the silk
kissing petals of love.

Mon Amour that she
is my warm summers breeze
she is.

© 2014 Benita Staebell McCartney

 

Author's Note

Inspired by the beautiful picture of the lady.

written Jan. 30,2015
2:10am

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

oh man!! so gentle and wistful .. sparks my hope for spring anew on this -7 degree morning and after the depressing Punxsutawney Phil prediction this year .. 6 more weeks of winter UGH!
the curves your lines make add to a delicious array of visual, olfactory and touch senses ... just a fine experience to read .. and wonderful tribute
E.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Thank you your reviews and comments are appreciated. yes that is how I wanted it to be very peaceful and soft piece seems how something is written brings out how the poet is in real life, and I was thinking of spring when I wrote this it seems :) I get depressed when I can't go out in do things during the cold weather cabin fever like a bird trapped in a cage I am a spring baby Next month is my birthday they're saying there will be a early spring here in the south I am hoping so I am sick of this cold I want to get out in the sunshine. God bless. Benita

[Einstein Noodle]

God bless you too Benita! I think around this time Spring is sorely looked for everywhere .. and i hope its early here too!

[Confuser]

Oh Benita, how lovely it is; you did a fabulous job; quite a picture, but a beautiful writing. Slowly calmy it builds. Thank you. Dale

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Thank you your reviews and comments are appreciated. yes that is how I wanted it to be very peaceful and soft piece seems how something is written brings out how the poet is in real life. and spring was on my mind while writing this that might of been the other part of this Inspiration Next month is my birthday a spring baby and I keep hearing on the radio that spring will come early here in the south I hope so this cold has been depressing me cabin fever like a bird trapped in a cage I want to get out in the sunshine walk and so much need to start exercising again. God bless. Benita

[Confuser]

God Bless you too Benita. I was just talking about walking again; really need to; it's cold tonight though. I'm in the south like you - spring will be beautiful.

[Saddam]

Mon Amour that she
is my warm summers breeze
she is.

Its like sweat breeze on me. Lovely.....

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Thank you your reviews and comments are appreciated. yes that is how I wanted it to be very peaceful and soft piece seems how something is written brings out how the poet is in real life. and spring was on my mind while writing this that might of been the other part of this Inspiration Next month is my birthday a spring baby and I keep hearing on the radio that spring will come early here in the south I hope so this cold has been depressing me cabin fever like a bird trapped in a cage I want to get out in the sunshine walk and so much need to start exercising again. You meant a sweet breeze on you didn't you? God bless. Benita

[wordman]

a beautiful picture you have painted,it`s almost like I am in that meadow feeling that summer breeze

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Thank you your reviews and comments are appreciated. yes that is how I wanted it to be very peaceful and soft piece seems how something is written brings out how the poet is in real life. and spring was on my mind while writing this that might of been the other part of this Inspiration Next month is my birthday a spring baby and I keep hearing on the radio that spring will come early here in the south I hope so this cold has been depressing me cabin fever like a bird trapped in a cage I want to get out in the sunshine walk and so much need to start exercising again. God bless. Benita

[wordman]

it was my pleasure,happy birthday early my birthday is the 23 rd of march

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Thank you mines 27th of march happy early birthday to you as well.

[wordman]

I will be 16

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

are you Kidding me.

[wordman]

no,i wasn`t kidding I lied lol 48 or 66 you guess

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

I don't know you don't look like 16teen to me. my mother in law is older but she say's she is 18teen every year :) Well I know you aren't 66

[Bright Ocean Star]

Beautiful, Benita. Gentle, like the summer's breeze you mentioned. Excellent writing...:)

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Thank you your reviews and comments are appreciated. yes that is how I wanted it to be very peaceful and soft piece seems how something is written brings out how the poet is in real life. and spring was on my mind while writing this that might of been the other part of this Inspiration Next month is my birthday a spring baby and I keep hearing on the radio that spring will come early here in the south I hope so this cold has been depressing me cabin fever like a bird trapped in a cage I want to get out in the sunshine walk and so much need to start exercising again. God bless. Benita

[Alfred Kukitz]

The beauty of the lady and the beauty of the poem coalesce into a poet's heart blossoming.

Regards,

Al

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Thank you your reviews and comments are appreciated. yes that is how I wanted it to be very peaceful and soft piece seems how something is written brings out how the poet is in real life. and spring was on my mind while writing this that might of been the other part of this Inspiration Next month is my birthday a spring baby and I keep hearing on the radio that spring will come early here in the south I hope so this cold has been depressing me cabin fever like a bird trapped in a cage I want to get out in the sunshine walk and so much need to start exercising again. God bless. Benita

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Wow, a beautiful poem indeed, I love your use of summer breeze in the poem.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Thank you your reviews and comments are appreciated. yes that is how I wanted it to be very peaceful and soft piece seems how something is written brings out how the poet is in real life. and spring was on my mind while writing this that might of been the other part of this Inspiration Next month is my birthday a spring baby and I keep hearing on the radio that spring will come early here in the south I hope so this cold has been depressing me cabin fever like a bird trapped in a cage I want to get out in the sunshine walk and so much need to start exercising again. God bless. Benita

[jacob erin-cilberto]

beautiful description here...
a lovely poem.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Thank you your reviews and comments are appreciated. thank you for you kind words. god bless. Benita

[Ed Fagan]

This is such a soft and tender write. nice work.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Thank you your reviews and comments are appreciated. yes that is how I wanted it to be very peaceful and soft piece seems how something is written brings out how the poet is in real life. God bless. Benita