Promise Land

Collaboration by Wordman and Kindred poet/ Benita Staebell McCartney Written Dec. 10,2014

On the mountain top  looking at the valley below  a

fine whisper of snow covering the ground,

A breeze blowing gently across my face  the song amazing

grace floods into my soul

I reach out and touch the face of God.

His word is in the clouds in the sunsets

etched upon our hearts.

his breath breathes life into

everything that praises his name.

Jesus you're the tears that fall from my face

when a storm comes

but your sunrises are a smiling blessing

saying that the storms will soon pass.  

Standing on a mountain top

looking at the valley below

I can feel a fine mist of snow

as it comes falling down.

A cold breeze blowing across my face

as I listen to the angels singing amazing grace

I can feel his hand as it touches my face.

A promise Land blessed

with  milk and  honey over flowing fountain

of fresh springs and babbling brooks  we walk

as brightness and his Lamp his light shineth  within us

and he leads us to his Promise land.

Where we can live

with no pain or sorrow

and we know

 we have the promise of tomorrow

in our promised land.

Wearing a garment of praises always

and not having a heavy sadness and

not carrying a spirit of heaviness but

always giving his  Sacrifices of praises,

 

And never being clothed in Mourning

but covered in his oil  of joy  speaking

his Lovely, Lovely  powerful name JESUS! 

Collaboration by Wordman

and  kindred poet/ Benita Staebell McCartney

Author's Note

Collaboration by and with Wordman and Benita Staebell McCartney
Written Dec. 10,2014


Jesus Lover Of My Soul (worship video w/ lyrics)

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

I haven't done a collaboration...since Myspace days...but I did include the work in my first book of verses...I would suggest putting your color arrangement for his part and yours...so we can get a better outlook on the verse...this has a spiritual feel in the mist of things...as I read the words...

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Yes it's how we meant it to be to do with Jesus and the promise land thank you for your kind review and comments they're appreciated. I will keep that in mind. God bless. Benita

[Glen Yumang Manese]

You're welcome...

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Wordman thanx you as well.

[Layi Tate]

YOUR Writing NEVER Ceases TO amaze ME AND Bring MY Eyes TO Tears FOR MANY REASONS ....... Beautiful very beautiful & exactly how I feel ......
I want to go HOME !!!! I CANT TAKE THIS LIFE ANYMORE !!!!! :'(

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Will keep praying for you. Thank you :)

[Layi Tate]

Wish I was there instead of having to go through this ... :'(
Beautiful poem about HOME.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

were still praying for you. get nigh to god and he will get nigh to you. Resists the devil and he will flee. Thank you your review and comments are appreciated. blessings. Benita

[wordman]

there will always be sunshine and there shall always be rain just be prepared for either

[B.J]

So well done and brilliant

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

We both thank you and your review and comments are appreciate. Thank you I do love doing
Collaborations with other poets so if you ever want let me know it is very healing and I love writing and this came out beautifully when we wrote it. Blessings. Benita

[B.J]

your welcome

[wordman]

and i thank you

[Matching Socks]

Well done you two! :)
Admire you both greatly, good to see you come together for a beautiful collab.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

We both thank you and your review and comments are appreciate. Thank you I do love doing
Collaborations with other poets so if you ever want let me know it is very healing and I love writing and this came out beautifully when we wrote it. Blessings. Benita

[wordman]

thank you very much

[Bluefire]

Beautifully bathed in celestial pureness. Exquisitaly crafted into an amazing piece.
This really inspired me.
Well done!

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

We both thank you and your review and comments are appreciate. Thank you I do love doing
Collaborations with other poets so if you ever want let me know it is very healing and I love writing and this came out beautifully when we wrote it, well I am glad it Inspired you. Blessings. Benita

[Bluefire]

You're welcome. ^^

[wordman]

she done a great job putting it together,thank you

[Bluefire]

Nor problem. ^^

[wordman]

great job benita,love the music

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

well I didn't write this poem alone so thank you as well I love Collaborating with friends.
thank you my friend. Benita

[wordman]

you are welcome

[Bright Ocean Star]

Beautiful and splendorous. This transported me to the clouds. ... Just remember to capitalize God.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

We both thank you and your review and comments are appreciate. Thank you
I have to space things out and was pasting what we both said mad it easier and had to do some touch ups so it wasn't all bunched up. Benita

[Bright Ocean Star]

Ok.... Sounded great!

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

I just wanted to collaborate and I asked for me I love to do Collaborations :)

[wordman]

thank you bright ocean star

[Bright Ocean Star]

You are welcome wordman. anytime....