Violin Heart

this was written for a young struggling friend of mine Anthony known as PrinceofDarkness16 on WC Written June 28, 2014

Your heart is

a muse upon the

strings of a violin.

The sunshine appeases

your pain when

times are bad,

It's a calm breeze

upon your spirit.

Kindness of

loving eyes.

Always a good friend

and always understanding.

God is always watching

over us even when life

is hard.

You sound like a instrument

that needs to be

mended some days,

Then you're happy

at times we all go through

this in life.

Listen to the chorus

God plays upon

your heart not the

battlefield that the

devil starts.

There's a rainbow in the

mist of a storm

and  after the storm

it always gets better.

Copyright Kindred poet/  Benita Staebell  McCartney

Dedicated  to my friend

Anthony known as 

PrinceofDarkness16 on  WC

  

 

Author's Note

this was written for a young struggling friend
of mine Anthony known as PrinceofDarkness16 on WC


Written June 28, 2014

Written June 28, 2014

Reviews

[NeiL ArandA]

Beautiful and well spoken words coming from a wonderful heart of a poet . Such tenderness here in these lines . I read and heard about an old aging violin that was neglected and not much of any value or worth . But after it was touched by the Master and played a tune . The aging and worthless violin produces the most wonderful sweetest melody anyone have ever heard . And it was soothing to the soul . Read the story The Master's Touch . Thanks for sharing your thoughts and piece .

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

I will do that is it a book or poem piece that you've written or someone else has? he's been waiting for me to finish this write and I do hope he see's it Thank you your Kind review and comments are appreciated. Blessings. Benita

[ms. barrie]

Gorgeous, poem, full of such tenderness and care. He's a sweet soul,
And this is a wonderful tribute to him. He is in my thoughts.
Splendid write. I'm sure he'll read this soon
Thanks.for.sharing :)

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

he's been waiting for me to finish this write and I do hope he see's it Thank you your Kind review and comments are appreciated. Blessings. Benita

[ms. barrie]

You're very welcome, Benita, I forgot to add, that I love the
Gentle fluidity of this poem as well. - Brightest Blessings :)

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

well it was written to Encourage him :) thank you

[ms. barrie]

I'm sure it will, as well.as lifting his spirits up for a.while :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and hopeful poem for the Prince of Darkness. It is good when we send hope and love to another. You have always been kind to me. Thank you dear Poet for sharing the positive poem for a writer in need of good words.
Coyote

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

he's been waiting for me to finish this write and I do hope he see's it Thank you your Kind review and comments are appreciated. Blessings. Benita

[Coyote Poetry]

It is very good. He will like.

[Fran Marie]

A postive piece and all inspiring dedication for your struggling friend..very uplifting indeed, well done..

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

he's been waiting for me to finish this write and I do hope he see's it Thank you your Kind review and comments are appreciated. Blessings. Benita

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i think he would appreciate this...i hear the music, and see the light after the storm...i hope he can hear it and find it also.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

he's been waiting for me to finish this write and I do hope he see's it Thank you your Kind review and comments are appreciated. Blessings. Benita