If Poetry was a love song

Inspired by She's my Kinda rain By: Tim McGraw Some Repetitive Repetition repeat type poem This is how Poetry makes me feel. written for a contest. Written Nov. 13, 2014

If poetry was a

love song,

She'd be a soft

raining storm of millions

of raindrops,

Dancing water of music

she'd  be.

If poetry was a

beautiful woman,

She'd be the sweet

calm breeze of a

summers day.

The smiles of morning

sunshine waking you up

with innocent giggles.

If poetry could be a

love song,

She'd be  yellow sunflowers

in a field of lovers.

She'd be that white

sundress upon the shadows

of your dancing beauty.

If poetry was a

swaying tree,

She'd be a weeping willow

with silver tears of strength.

If poetry was the

crisp autumn days,

She'd  be the kisses

upon your cheeks

the silent hushing nights.

If poetry was the crystal

raindrops,

She'd  be  a beautiful

woman praising God in

the rain  dancing and laughing

like a giddy innocent child.

If poetry was a

love song,

She'd  be  the crashing

currents of the ocean singing

upon the moonlit  dark nights

water.

If you were a 

dancer poetry,

You'd  caress the floor with

your movements becoming

the music  a shimmering

 flower Cascading  across

the lights shadows.

If poetry was a love

song  this is how she'd

make me feel and this is

what she'd  be.

Copyright Kindred poet/ Benita Staebell  McCartney

Author's Note

Rain sound (10 hours)



Inspired by She's my Kinda rain By: Tim McGraw

Some Repetitive Repetition repeat type poem

This is how Poetry makes me feel.

written for a contest. Written Nov. 13, 2014

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree.
"She'd be the crashing
currents of the ocean singing
upon the moonlit dark nights
water."
A beautiful poem. Poetry and words of love are never forgotten. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry my dear friend.
Coyote

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Thank you writing is a gift from above as I have always
believed to write comes from God for me the LORD always helps me write I give him the reins
and God takes control as writing comes natural and that is a gift so the praise will go to God but thank you :) Your Review and comments are appreciated. blessings. Benita

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Rossen]

If poetry, this poem was a rating... it would have to be 100/100
lovely way you have,


Rossen

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Wow Thank you your review and comments are appreciated. I am pleased that you Enjoyed the poem. I really Enjoy writing this piece it was a different approach I like how it came out as a poem. Blessings. Benita

[jacob erin-cilberto]

love would be all these things if it were a love song...i do believe it...

i like the "weeping willow with silver tears of strength"---

i was reading this and singing to myself, Marshall Tucker's "heard it in a love song"

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

thank you your review and comments are appreciated. I am pleased you Enjoyed the poem. I had to check out the song you spoke of thank you for sharing nice song I see why it popped into your head. Blessings. Benita