If Poetry was a love song

Inspired by She's my Kinda rain By: Tim McGraw Some Repetitive Repetition repeat type poem This is how Poetry makes me feel. written for a contest. Written Nov. 13, 2014

If poetry was a

love song,

She'd be a soft

raining storm of millions

of raindrops,

Dancing water of music

she'd  be.

If poetry was a

beautiful woman,

She'd be the sweet

calm breeze of a

summers day.

The smiles of morning

sunshine waking you up

with innocent giggles.

If poetry could be a

love song,

She'd be  yellow sunflowers

in a field of lovers.

She'd be that white

sundress upon the shadows

of your dancing beauty.

If poetry was a

swaying tree,

She'd be a weeping willow

with silver tears of strength.

If poetry was the

crisp autumn days,

She'd  be the kisses

upon your cheeks

the silent hushing nights.

If poetry was the crystal

raindrops,

She'd  be  a beautiful

woman praising God in

the rain  dancing and laughing

like a giddy innocent child.

If poetry was a

love song,

She'd  be  the crashing

currents of the ocean singing

upon the moonlit  dark nights

water.

If you were a 

dancer poetry,

You'd  caress the floor with

your movements becoming

the music  a shimmering

 flower Cascading  across

the lights shadows.

If poetry was a love

song  this is how she'd

make me feel and this is

what she'd  be.

Copyright Kindred poet/ Benita Staebell  McCartney

Author's Note

Rain sound (10 hours)



Inspired by She's my Kinda rain By: Tim McGraw

Some Repetitive Repetition repeat type poem

This is how Poetry makes me feel.

written for a contest. Written Nov. 13, 2014

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree.
"She'd be the crashing
currents of the ocean singing
upon the moonlit dark nights
water."
A beautiful poem. Poetry and words of love are never forgotten. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry my dear friend.
Coyote

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Thank you writing is a gift from above as I have always
believed to write comes from God for me the LORD always helps me write I give him the reins
and God takes control as writing comes natural and that is a gift so the praise will go to God but thank you :) Your Review and comments are appreciated. blessings. Benita

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[B.J]

Your words are magic.. Poetry makes me feel life love and whole

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Thank you writing is a gift from above as I have always
believed to write comes from God for me the LORD always helps me write I give him the reins
and God takes control as writing comes natural and that is a gift so the praise will go to God but thank you :) Your Review and comments are appreciated. blessings. Benita

[B.J]

your most welcome

[willweb]

This was so wonderfully written. Yes, if poetry were a love song, I believe it would sound just like this.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

my favorite is about the weeping willow tree. Your review and comments are appreciated. I am pleased that you Enjoyed the poem. I really Enjoy writing this piece it was a different approach I like how it came out as a poem. Blessings. Benita

[wordman]

if poetry was a love song it would be a beautiful melody of two lovers sitting under a swaying tree
holding hands and sharing sweet kisses if poetry was a love song we could sing it together under that swaying tree

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

glad I could Inspire you :) my favorite is about the weeping willow tree. Your review and comments are appreciated. I am pleased that you Enjoyed the poem. I really Enjoy writing this piece it was a different approach I like how it came out as a poem. Blessings. Benita

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Wow what I moving and touching poem i am so happy I read it :)

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Thank you for kind review and comments they're appreciated. I am pleased that you Enjoyed the poem. I really Enjoy writing this piece it was a different approach I like how it came out as a poem. Blessings. Benita

[Valkyrie Warrior]

You are welcome

[Pryde Foltz]

If poetry was a
swaying tree,


She'd be a weeping willow
with silver tears of strength.

Brava … brava.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Why thank you for such kind review and comments they're appreciated. I am pleased that you Enjoyed the poem. I really Enjoy writing this piece it was a different approach I like how it came out as a poem. Blessings. Benita

[NeiL ArandA]

If this poetry site has an option where every poet could vote for best poem of the . I would certainly nominate this one . It really flows

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Why thank you for such kind review and comments they're appreciated. I am pleased that you Enjoyed the poem. I really Enjoy writing this piece it was a different approach I like how it came out as a poem. Blessings. Benita

[Dilan Gunawardana]

This is really sweet and calming, Benita. I like the choice of rain sounds to go with it. It works really well :)

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

I missed your review glad I come to look was about to review a friend back then I saw your comment, Why thank you for such kind review and comments they're appreciated. I am pleased that you Enjoyed the poem. I really Enjoy writing this piece it was a different approach I like how it came out as a poem. Blessings. Benita

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Wow now this is what I call highly romantic and sweet… when you truly love someone they are the living embodiment of poetic flesh.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Why thank you for such kind review and comments they're appreciated. I am pleased that you Enjoyed the poem. I really Enjoy writing this piece it was a different approach I like how it came out as a poem. Blessings. Benita

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You are very welcome… you should be very proud.

[Bluefire]

"She'd be that whitesundress upon the shadowsof your dancing beauty.If poetry was aswaying tree,She'd be a weeping willowwith silver tears of strength."
~*~
"She'd  be  the crashingcurrents of the ocean singingupon the moonlit  dark nightswater."
~*~
This is sweet and beautiful.
A soft picture, broken up into dancing imagery which calms the heart and weaves through the mind's eye like a shooting star.
Well done!

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Thank you for such beautiful review and comments they're appreciated. I am pleased that you Enjoyed the poem. I really Enjoy writing this piece it was a different approach I like how it came out as a poem. Blessings. Benita