Fallen down the gray rabbit hole

my Fantasy based Poem my Halloween Poem in my eyes I don't do scary much I don have ones that are but this one isn't you decide. written Oct. 15 2014

Falling through the cracks

of this Alice-in-Wonderland

dream.

Tell me where

am I where have

I gone to?

Queen says off

with your head she SCREAMS.

I've fallen and

I have hit rock bottom.

Where has the rabbit

hole disappeared to.

Running through this

white nothingness empty room.

Hallway that's gray and

dim  full of broken stairways.

Darker shade of gray

fallen though the cracks

of Alice-in-wonderland.

This Masquerade tea party

crazy Cheshire cat laughing

at you.

In a mirror glass of a

different world shattered glass

cracks to pieces.

Copyright  Kindred poet/ Benita Staebell McCartney  

Author's Note

my Fantasy based Poem my Halloween Poem in my eyes
I don't do scary much I don have ones that are but this one isn't
you decide. written Oct. 15 2014

Halloween not my favorite time I love Autumn more then Halloween

Reviews

[Bright Ocean Star]

I am not much of an Alice in Wonderland fan, but I love the concept of using the Disney version of the tale and wondering when or how you fell down the rabbit hole...I think we all feel that way every now and again, when our world just looks like it turned upside down. Great write, Benita. I thoroughly enjoyed this one. Be blessed...

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

I am glad you liked it I love dream like Fantasy poems.Thank you for your kind review and Comments they're appreciated. This was merely only for Halloween this didn't really reflect around my life I just love fantasy based stuff like this. Thank you for your kind words though I love Alice-in-wonderland I have 2 other poems based off of it but different but they were not for Halloween. Blessings. Benita

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

My pleasure, Benita. Have a good day. :)
Rudi

[Nitesh Mahabal]

You Express Your Imagination So Well

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Thank you your review and comments are appreciated. I love Alice-in-Wonderland and I love writing about Fantasy based writes like this it is fun I'm glad you liked the write. Blessings. Benita

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

You have touched the right atmosphere of Alice in Wonderland. The fantastic of her voyage down the rabbit hole. I love particularly the last stanza. Very well done, Benita, liked it very much. :)
Rudi

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

I am glad you liked it I love dream like Fantasy poems.Thank you for your kind review and Comments they're appreciated. This was merely only for Halloween this didn't really reflect around my life I just love fantasy based stuff like this and I love the Alice-in-wonderland stories. Thank you for your kind words though I love Alice-in-wonderland I have 2 other poems based off of it but different but they were not for Halloween. Blessings. Benita

[Moonie]

I like how you used the alice in Wonderland concept in such a mature and powerful poem. My favourite lines would be
" This Masquerade tea party

crazy Cheshire cat laughing

at you."


Be blessed! :))

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

I love stories that are like a fantasy world and Alice-in-wonderland and I love Alice-in-wonderland
I have done lot of writes like fantasy and labyrinths and I love the Movie The Labyrinth with David Bowie I did do something based off of that but was set to mature because the video showed a little nudity I don't do too many Mature based poems but the poem itself wasn't mature but the video had Jareth and Sahara finding each other and she is a woman at the time. Your comments and review are appreciated thank you. have a blessed weekend. Benita

[Matching Socks]

Benita, this is another good one for Halloween. But yet, you keep saying you don't like Halloween?
Lol. I think you're a closet Halloween lover and need to unleash your inner freak for one night...

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

I love the candy and the cool weather crisp autumn smell and beautiful leaves and pumpkin's I love the safe Halloween festivals mostly ones Sponsored by churches and love Jumping into fresh racked leafs :) Big kid at heart. this was like a fantasy based write I love Alice-in-wonderland. Your review and comments are appreciated. Blessings. Benita

[Coyote Poetry]

Alice in Wonderland. Could lead you to wild dreams and places. I enjoyed the journey and thoughts in the words. You create many visions in the amazing poem my dear friend.
Coyote

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

I am glad you liked it I love dream like Fantasy poems.Thank you for your kind review and Comments they're appreciated. I am glad you Enjoyed the Journey. Blessings. Benita