Always be  my freedom and safe place

Always be my freedom and safe place

A Poem by Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet
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written Sept. 5 2014 Friday this was inspired by this Song My freedom by Krystal Meyers Christian song

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Rain on my pain

and dry my tears.


Wash me in love.


Hold me and keep

me safe.


When I hide from

what I've done,


I know you'll

forgive me.



when I cry out you can

feel my pain and already

know what I'm feeling.


 


This bleeding heart is

crying out to you  I

need you Jesus.


Free me LORD always

be my strength my refuge.


Always be my freedom

and safe place to stay near.



Copyright Kindred poet/ Benita Staebell McCartney

© 2014 Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet


Author's Note

Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet
written Sept. 5 2014 Friday
this was inspired by this Song My freedom
by Krystal Meyers


This is how I feel when I am praying to god
and then the pain goes away and cry and an
amazing Peace Just washes over me it is the
most peaceful calming feeling you could feel
it isn't the worlds peace but Jesus peace.



Krystal Meyers My Freedom



Can You feel this heart?
It's beating
Like a drum it's beating
It's calling out to You
Will You come and rain on
this desert heart
Like only You can do
Can hear this soul?
It's crying
My soul is crying
Calling out to You
Will You come and wash over me
Like only You can do


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It's a good feeling to know love and to feel protected and safe.
To have that person in your life that you can turn to.
Well done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

10 Years Ago

This was about Jesus but yes I do agree with what you've
said thank you for your lovely revi.. read more
Beautiful and a hopeful prayer. We need to feel safe and know love. Thank you for sharing your beautiful and positive words dear Poet.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely review and comments I really appreciate it. you're welcome I am glad that .. read more
Coyote Poetry

10 Years Ago

You are welcome.

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Added on September 5, 2014
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