Raining Sunshine

Inspired from some of Einstein Noodle poem Rain and from the you tube video Sun & Rain - Tenfold Loadstar Written Aug.21 2014. 1:10am http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/BorgLackluster/1398630/

Drip, Drip as the

rain falls.

Summer sunshine

I remember your sweet

Smile.

Humid heat warm

wet falling skies.

Dancing in the cold

puddles cooling off

from the humidity.

Watch the raindrops

singing in  the clouds.

Then comes the

rainbow and your

Smiles in the

Summer sunshine.

No sad dreams here

just memories of your

raining laughter.

Copyright Kindred poet/ Benita Staebell  McCartney

Author's Note

"Where ever you go, no matter what the weather, always bring your own sunshine." Anthony J D'Angelo



Inspired from some of Einstein Noodle poem Rain and
from the you tube video Sun & Rain - Tenfold Loadstar

Written Aug.21 2014. 1:10am

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/BorgLackluster/1398630/


Sun & Rain - Tenfold Loadstar

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

oooooooooooo i like this a lot .. it is so uplifting and has very sweet subtle sensuality .. i like the colors tho the yellow for some reason causes my focus to go buggy .. not sure what it is .. title and poem are perfect .. what a great way to see and feel the rain .. very nice .. i feel honored that you found a bit of inspiration from one of my poems .. you do me honor .. thank you .. and thank you for sharing this positive happy poem!
E.
ps that is a great song isn't it!? :)

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Well didn't see it as sensual. was more about rain and the weather and love. sorry about the Color bothering your eyes ermm. You're welcome was a pleasure. I am glad that you liked it.thank you for your kind review and comments. I really appreciate it. blessings. Benita/ kindred poet

[Einstein Noodle]

the third and fourth verses have words that trigger sensuality .. i must have read some of the "mature" poems before stopping here ;).. i like thinking that rain and love have a sensuality connected and woven within .. so i will keep my impressions .. but even if not intended .. your poem is a pleasure to read .. :)) for me it is such a good poem ..
E.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

I love storms and the rain they are beautiful instrument playing upon the roof tops like the Ballet Dancer becoming one with the music it is beautiful to me always looked at it that way and loved storms and rain since I was a little. thank you :)

[Einstein Noodle]

oooooooooooo i like this a lot .. it is so uplifting and has very sweet subtle sensuality .. i like the colors tho the yellow for some reason causes my focus to go buggy .. not sure what it is .. title and poem are perfect .. what a great way to see and feel the rain .. very nice .. i feel honored that you found a bit of inspiration from one of my poems .. you do me honor .. thank you .. and thank you for sharing this positive happy poem!
E.
ps that is a great song isn't it!? :)

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Wow this is beautiful!! I Literally know what you were feeling and I got your emotions quite vividly. Really an emotional piece and so heart touching! Well Done :)
-CDB

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

I am glad that you liked it. thank you for your kind review and comments. I really appreciate it. blessings. Benita/ kindred poet

[Raymond Federle]

Wonderfully done, full of emotion. -SHADES

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

I am glad that you liked it. thank you for your kind review and comments. I really appreciate it. blessings. Benita/ kindred poet

[Bluefire]

Pretty, it makes me think of the good times in summer rain rather then the bad.
Well played, very beautiful. ^^

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

I am glad that you liked it. thank you for your kind review and comments. I really appreciate it. blessings. Benita/ kindred poet

[Bluefire]

You're welcome. ^^

[Lauriegirl]

This totally refreshed me and my spirit..The imagery is nothing less than divine and perfect..I love every line

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

I am glad that you liked it. thank you for your kind review and comments. I really appreciate it. blessings. Benita/ kindred poet

[Matching Socks]

It's always nice when the rain brings goodness with it. Most associate it with bad memories or gloomy events. Nice job B.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

I am glad that you liked it. thank you for your kind review and comments. I really appreciate it. blessings. Benita/ kindred poet

[jacob erin-cilberto]

nice oxymoron in the title...and the paradoxes fall nicely in this poem, like a gentle rain to basque in.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

I am glad that you liked it. thank you for your kind review and comments. I really appreciate it. blessings. Benita/ kindred poet