Pearl Beneath the Sea

Collaboration done with Jonathan Edward Furches. written July 22. 2014

She is a Diamond in the rasp a Treasure in the sea

The music in the Oceans Waves.

Where love flutters like a breeze On a Summer Mornings Day

where Gulls sing to the wisp of the wind.

Where love takes her, she sails within a spin upon

the currents of her heart

hypnotized by the Crystal Opel Reflection of

shells that Shine in deep Blue waters.

She's cut from fine stones, and never sinks to be.

 Love Plays the harp strings

of her heart as she dances with the shadows of the lovely sunsets

smiles.

 Magical Whispers of the seas Reefs

singing Moonlit colors glowing upon her Golden Locks of Curls.

She produces a flow of the maidens inn where love and grace become

within reaching the bottom of pearl delight her shine as moonlight

She settles of my day beyond the dark of seas,

brings me this delight of her ocean breeze

Reflection of Her

blue eyes look back at you running Upon sand Castles washed

away from the salty

waters lets find our dreams in a carefree

place without any worries.

Illuminated Beauty roars from

beneath the whisper of the tangible

beams of light that  is reveled from the reefs

of the  deep blue ripples of waves.

Collaboration done by Benita Staebell McCartney &

Jonathan Edward Furches

Author's Note

Collaboration done with Jonathan Edward Furches. written July 22. 2014

Reviews

[just Penny]

I like the clear descriptions here and how they offer a feeling of something being precious. To "sail within a spin upon the currents of her heart" has a light free tone. Pearls are amazing and beautiful. I think you two captured that really well in your writing. Congrats to both of you. Penny

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Jon thanks you as well we both do we appreciate it. we both thank you for your kind review and comments. glad you Enjoyed it. Blessings. Benita/ kindred poet

[Edward Lancheister]

excellent collaboration, i like the flow line by line. great meaning of love & life.

thanks for share :)

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Jon thanks you as well we both do we appreciate it. we both thank you for your kind review and comments. glad you Enjoyed it. Blessings. Benita/ kindred poet

[Rene Salinas]

I thought someone had submerged me into Claude Cebussy's - La Mer and coming from a rather cerebral impulse towards things the swaying, and the dancing of the words quasi soothing. It wasn't only until the end that the collaboration aspect shone through and yes it is noticable but in nuances rather than in fragments. As most of the wryting is inviting and enchanting like the cry of the sirens. And probabl that motif the nuances is the best description as I only ingested and enjoyed for the pleasure of enjoying.

And no sea sickness either

Thankyou kindly both

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Jon thanks you as well we both do we appreciate it. we both thank you for your kind review and comments. glad you Enjoyed it. Blessings. Benita/ kindred poet