Pearl Beneath the Sea

Pearl Beneath the Sea

A Poem by Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet
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Collaboration done with Jonathan Edward Furches. written July 22. 2014

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She is a Diamond in the rasp a Treasure in the sea
The music in the Oceans Waves.


Where love flutters like a breeze On a Summer Mornings Day
where Gulls sing to the wisp of the wind.



Where love takes her, she sails within a spin upon
the currents of her heart
hypnotized by the Crystal Opel Reflection of
shells that Shine in deep Blue waters.


She's cut from fine stones, and never sinks to be.
 Love Plays the harp strings
of her heart as she dances with the shadows of the lovely sunsets
smiles.


 Magical Whispers of the seas Reefs
singing Moonlit colors glowing upon her Golden Locks of Curls.


She produces a flow of the maidens inn where love and grace become
within reaching the bottom of pearl delight her shine as moonlight
She settles of my day beyond the dark of seas,
brings me this delight of her ocean breeze


Reflection of Her
blue eyes look back at you running Upon sand Castles washed
away from the salty
waters lets find our dreams in a carefree
place without any worries.




Illuminated Beauty roars from
beneath the whisper of the tangible
beams of light that  is reveled from the reefs
of the  deep blue ripples of waves.


Collaboration done by Benita Staebell McCartney &
Jonathan Edward Furches

© 2014 Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet


Author's Note

Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet
Collaboration done with Jonathan Edward Furches. written July 22. 2014

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I like the clear descriptions here and how they offer a feeling of something being precious. To "sail within a spin upon the currents of her heart" has a light free tone. Pearls are amazing and beautiful. I think you two captured that really well in your writing. Congrats to both of you. Penny

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Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

10 Years Ago

Jon thanks you as well we both do we appreciate it. we both thank you for your kind review and comme.. read more



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A new favorite, Kindred poetess. Thank you as well, Jonathon Edward Furches. I really enjoyed this. I could almost hear the mermaid song in the summer island's beach breeze. Great writing. Thank you.

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Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

9 Years Ago

Jon thanks you as well we both do we appreciate it. we both thank you for your kind review and comme.. read more
Wow. The poem is amazing. The description took me to beautiful places and thoughts. You two did a outstanding job. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

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Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

10 Years Ago

Jon thanks you as well we both do we appreciate it. we both thank you for your kind review and comme.. read more
Beautiful work you two...not sure about the word 'rasp' used here, but I understood what you meant. Love the imagery of the sea....


hypnotized by the Crystal 'Opal' Reflection of
shells that Shine in deep Blue waters.

Nicely pen'd collaboration.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

10 Years Ago

Jon thanks you as well we both do we appreciate it. we both thank you for your kind review and comme.. read more
What a beautiful collaboration. Well done to both of you.
Always a beautiful romantic write when I visit. : )

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Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

10 Years Ago

Jon thanks you as well we both do we appreciate it. we both thank you for your kind review and comme.. read more
Matching Socks

10 Years Ago

Anytime my friend. :)
A delightfully distinguished piece of prose.

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Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

10 Years Ago

Jon thanks you as well we both do we appreciate it. we both thank you for your kind review and comme.. read more
Another really beautiful piece. Loved it:)

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Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

10 Years Ago

Jon thanks you as well we both do we appreciate it. we both thank you for your kind review and comme.. read more
A wonderful collaboration and mesmerising work! The imagery is soothing and fluid, most calmingly beautiful poem.

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Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

10 Years Ago

Jon thanks you as well we both do we appreciate it. we both thank you for your kind review and comme.. read more
Wow Sis you finished it up amazing:)))))))))))))))) I love it:)

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Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

10 Years Ago

ah well I didn't write this alone so take a bow brother your welcome and thank you. I appreciate it.. read more
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10 Years Ago

Smilesssssssssssssssssssssssssss:)
What a magical collaborations filled with exotic bliss… bravo you two for united to make this super poem.

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Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

10 Years Ago

Jon thanks you as well we both do we appreciate it. we both thank you for your kind review and comme.. read more
nicely done, guys...sounds like one.

love the beauty of the sea expressed here...somewhat reminds me of shawn Colvin's song "diamond in the rough"

even in the harshest waves, there is beauty...salty dreams, tasty...love in tangible waters.

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

10 Years Ago

Jon thanks you as well we both do we appreciate it. we both thank you for your kind review and comme.. read more

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