Dark Cinnamon Beauty

Inspired by the Beautiful Photo of the Indian girl written July 6 2014

The Breeze  of the wind

plays with her hair.

Look deep into her

Chocolate eyes and you

can see the sunsets dance in

the shimmer of her eyes.

She is a beauty and a love

to hold like a silk rose  yellow

and vibrant.

Lips as soft as petals

to touch.

Beautiful cinnamon dark

skin needs no make up

to say she's beautiful.

Piercing eyes she can

look right through your soul.

Such a Dark Cinnamon

Beauty.

Copyright Kindred poet/ Benita Staebell McCartney

Author's Note

Inspired by the Beautiful Photo of the Indian girl written July 6 2014

Reviews

[Daydreamer]

Look deep into her

Chocolate eyes and you

can see the sunsets dance in

the shimmer of her eyes.
# in this stanza, the repition of the word 'eyes' twice sounded a bit inappropriate,tbh... Perhaps you could change it to "their shimmer" or anything you find suitable :)
#the same comment regarding the fifth stanza- with the word "beautiful"
I'm sorry if my words offended you but it wasn't my intention, I just strongly believe in the importance of constructive criticisms.
Very lovely theme, I adore people who have "their own beauty".... They're just pretty to everyone else, but to specific people,they're absolutely gorgeous. My favorite type of beauty!😍

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

I don't get offended lot of times I am a laid back Chill soul :) I know you didn't mean it as cruel. Beauty is the heart if it is ugly then there is the and bitterness I see beauty and I see love and all skin color is beautiful to me. Thank you This is how I see her in the Photo even when I look at it.Have always been Fascinated with Beauty as well natural beauty it is what's in the heart that seems more beautiful. No Indian in our family like India. but there's Cherokee Native American on my mother and fathers side of the family so I am dark skinned like my Dad and we don't burn just tan and no one Lebanese in my family but I do know that our Cherokee roots are connected to the Lebanese roots many have thought I look Lebanese. and I have always been fascinated with ones of other cultures have many friends from all over so my life has been filled with culture since a young child. Thank you for your kind review and comments. I really appreciate it. Blessings. Benita/ Kindred poet

[Daydreamer]

Ofcourse I never meant to.... Our job is to help each other improve and not just overlook the flaws within any work and give fake compliments. I always try to be polite and considerate in sharing any suggestions... You are always welcome! True, beauty is from within, but some cases are exceptional,though!💜

[A. Amos]

You jnow the art of giving life to your words, you turn an ordinary indian girl picture into something grand. That is your magic as a writer, this poem was from out of the world.

Hope all is good my pal...

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Thank you for your kind review and comments. I really appreciate it.
yes everything is well Having a bowl of cereal this morning
and about the have some coffee. Hope you're well :) Blessings. Benita/ Kindred poet

[A. Amos]

You're welcome B, just madly working on my book, rest all okay. Enjoy your coffee and have a wonderful day my friend.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Same to you :) hope you have a wonderful day Yes I figured you've been working on your book.

[A. Amos]

Thnak you B, you're far too kind

[Matching Socks]

Another lovely descriptive poem, she is a beauty indeed. But beauty needs love.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

well yes but this was Fiction :) I am glad you liked it. thank you for your lovely review and comment. I really appreciate it. Blessings. Benita/ Kindred poet

[Matching Socks]

You are welcome. :)