The  little girl in me is a dancer and a poetess

The little girl in me is a dancer and a poetess

A Poem by Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet
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My muse is working thinking of dancing and writing the passion. written July 15 2014

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The dancer in the me

caresses the floor beneath

my feet.



In a magical place

that I am when my soul

flies.


when I write the ink

explodes from my Heart

upon this empty  sheet of paper.



Hear the beating sound of

a passionate Artist  dancer

poetess  muse creating

Dreams.


The poetess in me spills

the ink upon the paper

and I watch it create something

beautiful.



The little girl in me still

has the fire to dance and the

passion  to write.




Copyright Kindred poet/ Benita Staebell McCartney

© 2014 Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet


Author's Note

Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet
My muse is working thinking of dancing and writing the passion.

written July 15 2014

My Great grandma was a Ballerina Dancer and
I look just like her we are twins.
and I am very Flexible I was always dancing as a child
when my mom had music on I would dance I loved it and I loved
writing too.

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Dancing is my safe haven, to be completely honest -- as is Dale -- but I've been dancing since I was a kid and it really helps relieve stress but at the same time it is so beautiful and such a beautiful art. What kind of dancing do you do? This was lovely, a lovely poem about something you love so much -- it seems your family all loved to dance.

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Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind review and comments. I really appreciate. I am glad that you Enjoyed reading.. read more
Kayleigh

10 Years Ago

Wow, you are a dancer. I used to do street dance, modern and tap. Now I mainly just do freestyle an.. read more



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Your poetry always takes me to the stuff of daydreams. : )
Beautiful piece Kindred. :-)

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Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

10 Years Ago

I am glad it does I am bit of a daydreamer in a different place when I am writing. Thank you my fr.. read more
Matching Socks

10 Years Ago

Awwwww... :-)
It's good to have that playful youthfulness.
Keeps things light and fun.
Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

10 Years Ago

yes it is :)
I love the burning passion to write:))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

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Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

10 Years Ago

Thank you my friend for your kind review and comments. I really appreciate. I've been told I have a .. read more
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10 Years Ago

I don't have kids but I know what its like speaking to my inner child inside so yeah:) your welcome:.. read more
Dancing is my safe haven, to be completely honest -- as is Dale -- but I've been dancing since I was a kid and it really helps relieve stress but at the same time it is so beautiful and such a beautiful art. What kind of dancing do you do? This was lovely, a lovely poem about something you love so much -- it seems your family all loved to dance.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind review and comments. I really appreciate. I am glad that you Enjoyed reading.. read more
Kayleigh

10 Years Ago

Wow, you are a dancer. I used to do street dance, modern and tap. Now I mainly just do freestyle an.. read more
to create and write is a great passion one can have ...
well expressed piece ...indeed!

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind review and comments. I really appreciate. I am glad that you Enjoyed reading.. read more
beautifully expressed and wonderfully written.

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Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind review and comments. I really appreciate. I am glad that you Enjoyed reading.. read more
The part of this poem that struck me the most was, "when I write, the ink explodes from my heart." What a great way to express your emotions. I like like this very much. I think I'll remember that thought for awhile.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind review and comments. I really appreciate. I am glad that you Enjoyed readin.. read more
sweetttt a very nice poem i can relate too ..
The little girl in me still
has the fire to dance and the
passion to write. I love it

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

10 Years Ago

Thank you my friend for your kind review and comments. I really appreciate. I've been told I have a .. read more
Eve Ola

10 Years Ago

aww so sweet what you wrote i can feel deep by my heart. you are really a sweet person with kind hea.. read more
Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

10 Years Ago

I won't change I was kind as a child. like my mom :) she's a RN nurse and writes short stories more.. read more
I say I will grow old but I will never grow up… keeping in touch is the key to happiness as an adult..
Wonderful writing my friend. I love when you spill the ink on the paper.

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Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

10 Years Ago

Thank you my friend for your kind review and comments. I really appreciate. I've been told I have.. read more
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

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Hey I know I am very immature at times, but responsible when I need to be… you are welcome for the.. read more
Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

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I didn't mean I am Immature LOL... but that's fine ha...ha I just mean I see it from that prospectiv.. read more

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