Making love in Autumn

was Thinking of my husband this was inspired by this Autumn Photo I love Autumn and been listening to Mariah Carey tunes I love her music. Written July 5 2014

Light the old oil

lamps and chase me

like you always do Baby.

Lets make love out

in this sexy Autumn night.

The stars  twinkle and wink

at how our bodies dance upon

the leafs in this Hot evening.

Cinnamon and Honey so sweet

on the tip of your tongue.

Soft whispers of your voice

says my name upon the wisp

of the wind Oh Baby!

So light those old oil lamps

and chase me through the tall grass

can you catch me baby.

Run with me like carefree innocent

children that's where I'm

at my love join me

Copyright Kindred Poet/ Benita Staebell  McCartney

Author's Note

was Thinking of my husband this was inspired by this Autumn Photo I love Autumn
My husband can't run due to his disability so that was my Imagination :( but it is still love
:) he can Chase me around our bed. Written July 5 2014

Hopeless Romantic what can I say it never left me :)

Reviews

[Bare trees]

Romantic words and imagination make this a splendidly written poem.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Thank you for your lovely review and comment. I really appreciate it.
making love is a work of art to me I see with rose colored glasses :) I love Autumn. Blessings. Benita

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and hopeful poem for love. I liked it. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry dear friend.
Coyote

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Thank you for your lovely review and comment. I really appreciate it.
making love is a work of art to me I see with rose colored glasses :) I love Autumn. Blessings. Benita

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Benita. It is my pleasure to read your words.

[David Scott]

To love with the affect of our childhood persona.
To chase this love for all our lives...
Beautiful concept.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Thank you for your lovely review and comment. I really appreciate it.
making love is a work of art to me I see with rose colored glasses :) I love Autumn. Blessings. kindred poet

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

A nice little romantic poem. Very good Visual imagery.
Well written.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

When I can I will review another one of your poems My sinus have gotten worst they were bad during the night but I feel Horrible I hardly eve get sick and I never stay sick long but I am heading to bed Thank you for your lovely review and comment. I really appreciate it.
making love is a work of art to me I see with rose colored glasses :) I love Autumn. Blessings. kindred poet

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

You just get well.
Best regards.

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A very pretty love :) is what I see sis:)

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Thank you for your lovely review and comment. I really appreciate it.
making love is a work of art to me I see with rose colored glasses :) I love Autumn. Blessings. kindred poet

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Welcome my sister:)

[Justin]

this was really great!!! romance and autumn = is a great poem, i am a huge fan of autumn!!!

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Thank you for your lovely review and comment. I really appreciate it.
making love is a work of art to me I see with rose colored glasses :) I love Autumn. Blessings. kindred poet

[Justin]

your welcome, autumn is one of those seasons that you can write poems about forever!!!!

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

very true indeed my friend :)

[Justin]

yup :) i loved how you talked about your husband in it!! that made it even amazing!!!

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

why thank you His name is Justin too :) and he is founder of the cooler weather.

[Justin]

your welcome, that is awesome how we have the same name, keep up your hard work on your poems and i will continue to read them :)

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

I will thank you :)

[Justin]

your welcome friend :) we are both awesome writers

[Ally Monique]

I'm loving this poem- im a HUGE fan of romance and autumn so this was a complete go for me! :) Beautiful piece of work, I LOVED it :)

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Thank you for your lovely review and comment. I really appreciate it.
making love is a work of art to me I see with rose colored glasses :) I love Autumn. Blessings. kindred poet

[Fran Marie]

sounds like a sweet and fun romantic time ..charming write, so well expressed

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Thank you my friend for your lovely review and comment. I really appreciate it.
making love is a work of art to me I see with rose colored glasses :) I love Autumn. Blessings. kindred poet

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i love autumn as well . it s nice lovely imaginery what i find here. i wish nice chase .

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Thank you my friend for your lovely review and comment. I really appreciate it.
making love is a work of art to me I see with rose colored glasses :) I love Autumn. Blessings. kindred poet