Become the Rhythm

Become the Rhythm Become the music Become the Beat Become the sway Become the Dancer Become the Passion watch her dance and Caress the floor with her Curves and movements. love for dance.

 Become the music watch

her loose control.

Sway with this feeling

this passion that dances

all though her body.

Don't let the dance

control you.

Be like the pen of a screaming

writer bleeding out your

passions and devotions.

the dancer doesn't think of

if they won't  like her she just

looses control and becomes the

rhythm.

Let  the rhythm become

your partner  let it fuse

all through your body  and heart

don't let  fear and worry stop  you.

Do you  hear the beat  you can't

stop from becoming  a work

of art  let the music and

your Heart  sway and guide you.

Become  the rhythm and

the dancer and your voice will

be there.

Become the rhythm

the music  the beat

the sway.

Become the dancer

the passion,

Watch her dance  and

caress the floor with her curves

and movements.

Become the passion

the rhythm.

Copyright Kindred poet/ Benita Staebell  McCartney

Author's Note

I love this movie and I love Dancing and this is how I feel but this is
what a dancer does she becomes the Rhythm and beat and is the passion
of the dance and dancer swaying with the beat.





Become the Rhythm Become the music Become the Beat Become the sway
Become the Dancer Become the Passion watch her dance and Caress the floor with her Curves and movements. love for dance. How I feel when I dance my love of dancing Written June 27 2014


Flashdance-She's a Maniac HD remastered

Reviews

[ms. barrie]

stunning write...kindred! I felt this one cause I love dancing...
especially belly dancing, and when I'm able to writing....I love
the two comparisons between because both are indeed a rhythm..your
soul's...when creating something. love the electric imagery of
the passion in expression, your words captured in this write
and as always the lyrical flow. excellent job. thanks for sharing :)

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

I thought it would Inspire you also a I love dancing I love ballet and I belly dancing I love dancing when the music is one any how :) Such Beautiful words thank you I have a Passion for dancing since my great grandma was a ballet dancer and it sets my pen on fire just like when I am dancing it is an amazing feeling. Thank you for your kind review and comment I really appreciate it. Blessings. kindred poet

[ms. barrie]

you welcome kindred, I use my kindle and sometimes I cannot view videos...
unfortunately, I cannot view this one :(

yes belly dancing is fun...although I took a mini presentation class...
I have to wait till Oct. to start the actual class. I according to
Mom was named after a ballet dancer, Barrie Chase. Might take
that as well :))

love n light :))

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

well very nice :) well if you've seen Flash dance it is the part when she is in her Dance outfit like she is stretching and dancing really fast. Good movie it is called Maniac if you do have a computer you can always look up this song if you can listen to it some time.

[ms. barrie]

lol I am an 80's gurl...of course I've seen flashdance...love that movie!

I remember that scence. my sister is visiting and then my niece...really
won't have access to a regular pc till next week or later.

I'll be sure to though when I can. :))

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Ok well Enjoy family time and have a blessed night. :))

[ms. barrie]

thank you Kindred....you too...love n light :)) xo

[Tate Morgan]

the movement of the piece is like a swiss watch i like the melody as well I agree the feelings of dancing singing and writing are all intertwined in the part of us that is human

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

thank you I have a Passion for dancing since my great grandma was a ballet dancer and it sets my pen on fire just like when I am dancing it is an amazing feeling. Thank you for your kind review and comment I really appreciate it. maybe if I can when I get home if I am not busy we can collaborate on the poem my friend Because I really am Eager to work on it, it keeps Haunting my thoughts LOL... In a good way though. I sit by the bay is a featured poem it is the one I was talking about :) Blessings. kindred poet

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This was very beautiful Sis:))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

thank you I have a Passion for dancing since my great grandma was a ballet dancer and it sets my pen on fire just like when I am dancing it is an amazing feeling. Thank you for your kind review and comment I really appreciate it. maybe if I can when I get home if I am not busy we can collaborate on the poem my friend Because I really am Eager to work on it, it keeps Haunting my thoughts LOL... In a good way though. I sit by the bay is a featured poem it is the one I was talking about :) Blessings. kindred poet

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Welcome it was very pretty:) and don't hurry your self I am in no hurry , and ok read in a min.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

well when I get ideas and thoughts in my head I can't really stop them unless I write them down so at times my thoughts are Nosie and loud it is a Therapy for me really.

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I understand I like it quite so I can think lol

[Frieda P]

Great message and sentiment here kindred poet....I love that movie too, you've got the beat down! Nicely pen'd my friend....

watch her 'lose' control

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Such Beautiful words thank you I have a Passion for dancing since my great grandma was a ballet dancer and it sets my pen on fire just like when I am dancing it is an amazing feeling. Thank you for your kind review and comment I really appreciate it. Blessings. kindred poet

[Frieda P]

I love to dance also...and poetry, music and dance together are perfecto! :)

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

I agree :)

[Matching Socks]

Another fine composition. :)
You have such a lovely flow.
Careful, your words may dance off the pages. :)

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Now if they dance of the page I may have to catch them with a net that
made me laugh thank you for your lovely words I have a Passion for dancing since my great grandma was a ballet dancer and it sets my pen on fire just like when I am dancing it is an amazing feeling. Thank you for your kind review and comment I really appreciate it. Blessings. kindred poet

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

For me this speaks so sensually and eloquently of how the n=muse inspire the writer to bleed their words onto a blank page.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Such Beautiful words thank you I have a Passion for dancing since my great grandma was a ballet dancer and it sets my pen on fire just like when I am dancing it is an amazing feeling. Thank you for your kind review and comment I really appreciate it. Blessings. kindred poet

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Oh it was so my pleasure my friend. Blessing to you too.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

the dancer and the music become one, the poet and the words become one...

both lift us off the floor---and make us feel almost an artistic sense of spirituality...

we dance, we write, we become.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Such Beautiful words thank you I have a Passion for dancing since my great grandma was a ballet dancer and it sets my pen on fire just like when I am dancing it is an amazing feeling. Thank you for your kind review and comment I really appreciate it. Blessings. kindred poet