You see what I don't

Inspired by Christian song Mandisa What if we were real About my LORD JESUS written June 23 2014

I feel as though

days that I'll break

into pieces.

I'm drowning in

my tears some days but

I feel this peace  that helps

me everyday  to keep on going.

I feel so broken some days

but you see something I don't

LORD  you see my beauty.

You see my bleeding  heart

all wrapped up in your love.

You see me in my worst

days and never leave  you're

always there Jesus my prince

of peace.

You're  my life saver  when

I'm drowning in my tears

I'm never alone.

You see what I  don't

Jesus  LORD of my Heart.  

copyright Kindred poet/ Benita Staebell McCartney

Author's Note

Inspired by Christian song Mandisa What if we were real About my LORD JESUS written June 23 2014

This is how I feel in the song many see me as strong sometimes
they won't see me break down and will only happen if I see them
as an trusting amazing friend not easy to be strong
but Jesus gives me that Strength to keep on going and that I can conquer
an mountain Top.

Mandisa: What If We Were Real - Official Lyric Video

Reviews

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Ill have to show you one I did on Mandisa as well:) awesome job Sis:)

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

and Thank you I have not written any poems of Jesus so I was focusing on him and was still writing them at this time this one was written. and it made me feel better I always cry when I write of him and listen to any Christian song and the Tears help they are cleansing. I really appreciate. thank you for your kind comment and review. Blessings. kindred poet

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Welcome:)))))))))))))

[Bluefire]

Mandisa!!!
Sorry, had to get that out.
Anywho, yet another beautiful piece. You should be very proud of yourself.
Well done. ^^

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

and Thank you I have not written any poems of Jesus so I been focusing on him and still am writing them. and it has made me feel better I always cry when I write of him and listen to any Christian song and the Tears help they are cleansing. I love your new Photo Beautiful. I really appreciate. thank you for your kind comment and review. Blessings. kindred poet

[Bluefire]

You're welcome, and thank you. ^^
It always helps, listening to Christian music, it's like God is singing to you directly only it's through someone else. ^^

[Muse]

His love is like a mother's love "unconditional" your heart is a pure heart. I enjoy reading you for that one simple reason. Well done.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Thank you I have not written any poems of Jesus so I been focusing on him and still am writing them. and it has made me feel better I always cry when I write of him and listen to any Christian song and the Tears help they are cleansing. I love your new Photo Beautiful. I really appreciate. thank you for your kind comment and review. Blessings. kindred poet