Play Guitar Naked in my Heart

Play Guitar Naked in my Heart

A Poem by Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet
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Old poem This was InSpired by a Quote "u ever seen a black man play guitar with no clothes on? and some my Imagination in there too ;))

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Can I Eat
Your Heart

Play Your
Mind

With this
Guitar

Of mine
on my Lap

Let  me
Know your Words

like i  do
Those

Sweet kisses  

of your Soul

I sit  here
in Play

In Nothing
but  my  

Naked
Heart  

Like you
Asked me to

So don't  be
Shy  or  be


Pulled
away  from
that  

I sit here
in Nothing

Playing my
Musical Heart  Away.


Copyright Kindred poet/ Benita Staebell McCartney  

© 2014 Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet


Author's Note

Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet
Written July 20, 2006 at 11:32:25 PM a old poem by a Quote "u ever seen a black man play guitar with no clothes on? and some my Imagination in there too not too Turn any one on but I have a feeling that I can't stop I was just Musing on the Quote Not trying to Make anyone over heat sexually but then the Imagination of a man I won't say tends to wander at times LOL... Its just so Weird I love Guitars its like how I love writing poetry guitars are very SExy too ;)

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same here..i love guitars as much as i love poetry...you managed to be amusing and did not overdo it..just perfect..

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

10 Years Ago

I don't usually overdo any of my writing But thank you for your kind review and comments they're app.. read more
Very cool piece...there's something about music that is just inherently sensual...only a musician (which I'm not) could write a piece of this magnitude...I feel like I've been given access to the psyche of a musician or a songwriter...awesome :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

10 Years Ago

I don't play the Guitar but did the key board in Elementary and played the piano a little I have a b.. read more
kublakhan27

10 Years Ago

You're most welcome, blessings to you as well :)
This poem is simply romantic and brilliant!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

10 Years Ago

lovely words Thank you Glad you Enjoyed the read. Thank you for your kind review and Comment I reall.. read more
"i sit here in nothing" but really i am sitting here in everything, because love is everything and it is all i need to play my music.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

10 Years Ago

lovely words Thank you Glad you Enjoyed the read. Thank you for your kind review and Comment I reall.. read more
Wonderfully written..
Engaging and romantic :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

10 Years Ago

lovely words Thank you Glad you Enjoyed the read. Thank you for your kind review and Comment I reall.. read more
Intimate, warm and enchanting.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

10 Years Ago

lovely words Thank you Glad you Enjoyed the read. Thank you for your kind review and Comment I reall.. read more
I sense a vulnerability wanting to expose itself. Very nice work!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind review and Comment. blessings. kindred poet
Strumming the heart strings at breakneck speed

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

10 Years Ago

lovely words Thank you Glad you Enjoyed the read. Thank you for your kind review and Comment I re.. read more
Love the vivid imagery! Amazing feeling in this rhythmic write!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

10 Years Ago

Glad you Enjoyed the read. Thank you for your kind review and Comment I really appreciate it. blessi.. read more
This is a very nice verse, well presented.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

10 Years Ago

Glad you Enjoyed the read. Thank you for your kind review and Comment I really appreciate it. blessi.. read more

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